Twilight Eclipse 09/09/09

I'm Schreiben a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If Du like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell Du that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice sagte smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

Mysterious love

-chapter one-



It was my first Tag of 11th grade.My alarm clock went off I stayed in bett for a little while I didnt want too get up.But after a miniute oder two I just got up.I went too my closet and pick out some clothes really it was just what I seen first.After I dressed my self I went down stairs too see my father in the küche makeing coffee.Soon he would be on his way too work, just like every day.My father is a lawyer for the town of Bartonville,Arkansas. Every body liked him thoughs who didnt did not know him very well,but he is very queit kinda like me.Him and my mother...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting Mehr nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a Minute of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are Du carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he sagte his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and sagte edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

bella's pov

edward sigh heavily took my hands between his and started to talk

"it all started one Tag at the hospital a couple months ago.." he sagte slowly he look at my face my face was curious and interest in hearing Mehr
he touch my cheek and continue Mehr quickly
"so i lied at the party when i told Du i didn't knew Du "

" I was workin in the hospital as a helper of my brother i was organizing some papers when i heard that all of the young male thoughts turn excited and extreamly happy"

wait the thoughts he heard????
but i didn't sagte anything i thought that maybe if i interrupted he wouldn't...