Edward und Bella

Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there Fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add Mehr descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. Du can E-Mail your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to Du and Du can post it oder change somethings I did. I would Liebe to write my own Fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really Bearbeiten stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!

This is for people who have been Lesen Esme's Story:

I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please Kommentar and tell me which ones Du like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:

Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment

If Du can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a Mehr interesting name so it draws Mehr attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a Liste of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!

THANK YOU!!!

Bella's Pov.

"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.

"Uh...where am I?" Esme sagte wearily.

"Bella?"

"Jasper?"

"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing Du all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking Du out for the rest of my-"

"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.

"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"

"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper sagte calmly.

Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.

"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.

Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"

"I will Zeigen you."

Then, Jasper hugged Edward.

Edward's Pov.

I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.

"Should we do it now? oder later?"

"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."

No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!

Rosalie: Uh...

Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?

Master: Alright, but just her.

Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!

NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......


Bella's Pov

I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)

"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.

Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!

Then I snapped myself out of that subject.

There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.

1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.

I now know what to do.

Then, I went back to the dark black schloss to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...

Renesmee Pov.

I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back Weiter to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.

"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he sagte gently.

"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.

Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.

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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.

As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.

Yesturday was the time of my life. Basicly because i got to see my college Friends and got to hang out with my Liebe of my life.(Thanks to her).
I probaly sagte thank Du thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got Du with the note!
The guys sagte Du would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got Du again!
I looked at her hand Schreiben it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
...
to be continued...

This takes place after Edward and the rest of the Cullens leaves Bella in New Moon.Here are the characters.They have a lot of different names.Some of the names i mixed up.There are some vampires.Some names are my Friends and family but that is the person's real name in the story.You can use these people as Du oder people Du know.

Bella schwan a.k.a Demi Lovato,Alex Russo,and Alana Azel
Nicknames:Aly,Dems and some more
Bella is half vampire and half wizard.

Ashley Tisdale a.k.a Sharpay Russo
Ashley is a wizard.

Kevin Jonas is a vampire along with his three brothers.His brothers are Joe,Nick,and Frankie.

Selena Gomez a.k.a Emily Russo
Selena is a wizard.

Sonny Monroe is Demi Lovato in real life.
Sonny is a wizard.

There are going to be a few Mehr parts.