Bella and Edward

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Uh great, are Du kidding me? My car would have to break down in front of this house of all them wouldn’t it? Gosh my life sucks. The creepy house down the road stared at me menacingly; I was closer to this house now than I had ever wanted to be in my entire life.
It was pouring down buckets and I could scarcely see because the now arising fog. I’d have to go to the house to get help, after all I could leave my car stalled in the middle of the straße like this, but the big guy scared me so much that I was willing to sit here...

Bella: “You stupid mutt! How could you? My baby!”
Jacob: “It wasn’t my idea, Bella!”
Bella: “I’ve held her all of one time, and already Du think Du have some moronic wolfy claim to her? She’s mine.”
Jacob: “I can share.”
Emmett: “Pay up.” [A small part of my brain wondered who had bet against this outcome. I didn’t waste much attention on it. I was too furious.]
Bella: “How dare Du imprint on my baby? Have Du Lost your mind?”
Jacob: “It was involuntary! Bella, would Du try to listen for just a second? Please?” Leah, back off.” [Leah curled her lip at me...