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Renesmee's point after breaking dawn

chapter 1 rnesmees point of view

"Jake, I really don't want to leave Du right now," I moaned as Jake made me get ready to leave.
It was unfair, I didn't HAVE to go Home now, but Jake was in enough trouble as it is. "Honey,
your father hates me enough as it is. Besides, Bella wants Du back Home with her." Jake held
his hand out and helped pulled me off his couch, "Jake, please, we haven't seen each other for
a long time," I pleaded. I pulled Jake down Weiter to me, "Besides, I Liebe you," I tried to
hypnotize Jake to let me stay with him for a few Minuten more....

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Bella's POV


"Bella!?" I heard someone call my name. I know that voice, I would know it anywhere.
"Edward!!" I yelled out.
Edward came into my view, he was too far away for my liking. It was only then that I realised where I was. I looked around, where am I? I have never seen this place before. It was a small village. There were small and simple houses made out of bricks. There were people walking around all in old fashioned clothes. I realised Edward...

“Well we don’t have time to sit here discussing this Carlisle can we try?” Rosalie asked impatiently
“Well ask Bella” I hope this works Edward I can’t stand having Bella being taken away from any of us. Not now. Not this way.
Rosalie’s thoughts were instantly smug. She will do it I ill make her this baby will survive. She will listen to me if not them.
We all rushed inside the house Jacob a little behind he was expecting monsters and blood even guts maybe. At any other time this would of made em laugh.
Bella hadn’t moved much she was still lay on the sofa a mounting under the...

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Eternally Faithless, Forever Hopeful
“Are there any other reasons as to why they’re here, Edward?” Carlisle inquired hastily. “No,” Edward replied, slightly taken aback, “They don’t even care to see whether Bella’s an immortal...

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The glass was cold against my palms, as I pressed them to the window. Rain poured down outside, running like a waterfall across the outside glass. It was cold, but I didn’t want cold. The house was empty, of course they were out playing baseball. Even my mother had went, though I knew she would only be umpire. She still had no interest in sports.
But they had left me here, all alone, to shiver in the cold Cullen house. I was supposed to be sleeping. It was a school...

I had to call, to see if the rumors where true. I picked up the phone and dialed the number I forgot. Its been three years since they left, a lot had happened that he needed to know about. The phone rang twice before someone answered. I imagined his green eyes.
"Hello, Cullen Residence." A female voice said.
"Hi,Is Edward there?" I said.
"UM yes,Hold on." I heard the voice yell Edward away from the phone."May I ask who's calling?" The voice sagte when it came back to the phone.
"It's Bella,Bella Swan." I said.
"Oh,Bella! " I heard the voice squeal."It's Alice,How have Du been?" She asked. I should...

Chapter 1
Cuddled up in my bett I remember the better days when Edward and I could tell each other everything. But how could I tell him something that could evidently ruin our friendship? I can’t bär not to have him in my life, no matter how small oder large a part he plays in it I shall keep the secret from him. Jacob knows something is wrong but what does he expect he knows I am in Liebe with Edward but won’t let me go. All I am to him is a schlagen, punsch bag! I and everyone else in Forks knows how he sleeps around and also wonder why I take him back, but how can I not as hard as it is to admit I...

???: _____________ we are here. It is time to wake up.
You: Huh? Em I don't want to get up.
Em: Du have to get off of the plane. We are here.
You got up and hung on to Emmett as if your life depended on it. Du got your lugguage and got in to a car and Du guys drove to a boot dock then he sped off in a motor boat. Before Du knew it Du were at a island. Du were about to get up when Du got really lightheaded and blacked out.
Emmett POV:
We got to the island and I turned to put the luggage on land and when I turned back around __________ was on the ground. I don't know what happened but, I am...

Chapter 2
You agreed and went to your room. Du laid down in your bett and thought about your life with the Cullens.
Flashback:
You: Mama?
Esme: Yes sweetie?
You: How come we Bewegen alot?
Esme froze and that was when everyone came in.
Carlisle: Whats the matter Esme?
You: I just asked why we Bewegen alot.
Esme: Carlisle I think it is time we tell her.
Edward: She deserves to know.
Alice: She is 9 now.
Jasper: She is too young.
Rose: Jasper is right what if she tells her friends?
Emmett: I don't think she would.
Carlisle: Edward Du are right she deserves to know. _____________, sweetie the reason we Bewegen alot...

1 Monat later
It is two months till Renesmee is born and i look like i am 9 months pregnant.Me and edward are moving into the house in two weeks and i actually cant wait it will be nice not being cramped in this house.I am packing things up for edward to bring to the house alice is here too to decide what stays and goes.
i like them,and i will be the one wearing the clothes not you"i sagte to her as she looked at my jeans.
"I know but Du will have to have nice clothes to go with your new face"she moaned,what did she mean my new face i looked at edward he was looking at alice as if he could kill...