I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have gepostet it over there too.
here are Links to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. Du will recognize many scenes I kept. Du will notice some things that I have combined. Du will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. Du will notice them.
This is my Sekunde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third oder possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would Liebe to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. Du could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if Du go according to the typical 1 page =1 Minute rule. Some scenes do go Von faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look vorwärts-, nach vorn to your comments.
Again, this is a Fan made script. If Du want to share it with friends, oder what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of Du gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope Du enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether Du want to PM me personally with a lengthy review oder just give me a shout out on my comments, I would Liebe it to death.
Thanks for reading!
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have gepostet it over there too.
here are Links to my screenplay
link
link
link
This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. Du will recognize many scenes I kept. Du will notice some things that I have combined. Du will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. Du will notice them.
This is my Sekunde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third oder possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would Liebe to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. Du could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if Du go according to the typical 1 page =1 Minute rule. Some scenes do go Von faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look vorwärts-, nach vorn to your comments.
Again, this is a Fan made script. If Du want to share it with friends, oder what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of Du gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope Du enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether Du want to PM me personally with a lengthy review oder just give me a shout out on my comments, I would Liebe it to death.
Thanks for reading!
Bella goes to the Cullens house to her daughter. She finally meets her. She has dark brown hair.But there is something different about her, she grows every day. She is a beautiful girl.
They take Renesmay outside. Then they find that there cousin was there watching then she ran away then the truble begins. She goes back and tells the vampire court that that they had a kid when bella was already a vampire. They kill the kids that were born vampires.They take there head off and burn it.But no Renesmay is half vampire half human.She has warm blood but had the skills of a vampire.Bella's skill was being a shield. She can spread it out oder keep it in her. Renesmay talks Von putting her hand on Du cheak. The vampire court was coming on the first snow fall to battle. They had to get as many witnesses as they could and start now.
They take Renesmay outside. Then they find that there cousin was there watching then she ran away then the truble begins. She goes back and tells the vampire court that that they had a kid when bella was already a vampire. They kill the kids that were born vampires.They take there head off and burn it.But no Renesmay is half vampire half human.She has warm blood but had the skills of a vampire.Bella's skill was being a shield. She can spread it out oder keep it in her. Renesmay talks Von putting her hand on Du cheak. The vampire court was coming on the first snow fall to battle. They had to get as many witnesses as they could and start now.
For those Twilight Saga Fans who are located in international film markets, the movie resource website IMDb has provided this Liste of known worldwide release dates for The Twilight Saga: Breaking Dawn – Part 2.
November 14th – Belgium, France, Italy, the Netherlands, Sweden, and Switzerland (Italian and French speaking regions).
November 15th – Argentina, Australia, Brazil, Croatia, Czech Republic, Denmark, Greece, Hungary, New Zealand, Portugal, Qatar, Russia, Thailand, and the Ukraine.
November 16th – Bulgaria, Canada, Colombia, Finland, Ireland, Lithuania, Mexico, Norway, Spain, Taiwan, Turkey, the United Kingdom, the United States of America, and Vietnam.
November 22nd – Armenia, Germany, Singapore, and Switzerland (German speaking region).
December 20th – Hong Kong.
December 28th – Japan.
November 14th – Belgium, France, Italy, the Netherlands, Sweden, and Switzerland (Italian and French speaking regions).
November 15th – Argentina, Australia, Brazil, Croatia, Czech Republic, Denmark, Greece, Hungary, New Zealand, Portugal, Qatar, Russia, Thailand, and the Ukraine.
November 16th – Bulgaria, Canada, Colombia, Finland, Ireland, Lithuania, Mexico, Norway, Spain, Taiwan, Turkey, the United Kingdom, the United States of America, and Vietnam.
November 22nd – Armenia, Germany, Singapore, and Switzerland (German speaking region).
December 20th – Hong Kong.
December 28th – Japan.
My eyes were opened when I first saw you,you made my herz skip a beat,I heard nothing but yours...your heart,Never have felt the way I feel about Du in a century,I want Du around me,but I'm in a dilema...you need to know
Chorus: Oh Bella,Oh Bella it's hard to resist,every Bewegen Du make,every step Du take,every word Du say,every breath Du take makes my herz ache,Oh Bella,Oh Bella it's hard to resist
I couldn't stop thinking about you,so oh,oh I revealed who I was,i could not hide, they say that's what happens when "two hearts collide" and I didn't believe until I experienced it,Does not change the fact that oh Bella Du need to hear
(Chorus)
But now looking since Du are mine,I guess Du could say we are doing fine but Im still reserved ,you think Im obsurd for saying I have to be careful but the fact still remains...
(Chorus)
Chorus: Oh Bella,Oh Bella it's hard to resist,every Bewegen Du make,every step Du take,every word Du say,every breath Du take makes my herz ache,Oh Bella,Oh Bella it's hard to resist
I couldn't stop thinking about you,so oh,oh I revealed who I was,i could not hide, they say that's what happens when "two hearts collide" and I didn't believe until I experienced it,Does not change the fact that oh Bella Du need to hear
(Chorus)
But now looking since Du are mine,I guess Du could say we are doing fine but Im still reserved ,you think Im obsurd for saying I have to be careful but the fact still remains...
(Chorus)