Twilight-Serie Article: MY OWN BOOK I HAVE WRITTEN Please give me some Guter Rat on how to make it better.

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MY OWN BOOK I HAVE WRITTEN Please give me some Guter ratte on how to make it better.

posted by house_of_nightx

THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE
PREFACE:

The grand ball of the anniversery of the vampire royal family the vampire royal family,the Reasmussens rule was beautifull with chandeliers of a thousand crystals hanging from the ceiling as the many guests below twirled along to mezmerising Musik on the dance floor,the ladys with their spectacular ball gowns and the gentlemen in there dashing suits.Although these were not just any guests these guests were made up of Vampires,Shapeshifters and Witches.

The Resmussens had a baby girl they called star, sterne because of her Unglaublich pale skin,midnight blue eyes and platinum coloured hair.As the Resmussens glided around the dancefloor Wird angezeigt their daughter to the guests the light flickered on and off as as they did one of the beautifull chandeliers smashed into the marble Gold and white floor.The guests started to part and the resmussens quickly saw why.A creature with the head of a snake,body of a tiger and tail of a skorpion was approaching them but as it didStar began to glow,a glow so bright it was almost blinding as the creature came close it spoke what sounded a lot like a prophecy:

' The child of the Resmussens,
When turned sixteen,
Will have to furfill her destiney,
For the fate of the world is in her hands,
As she will lead four to the final stand.'

As the creature stopped speaking it stepped closer to the Resmussens so close that they could hear its ragged breathing and taste its gastley breath in they mouths.Then unexpecyidly the creature traced a line down the right side of her face with a paw and what it left behind in its place was a sapphire coloured dragon that streached from her eyebrow all the way to her jaw.As Stars blinding glow began to dim so did the creature that propheciced star, sterne would be the leader of four others to save the world.

As the ball finished and the guests returned to there homes the King and Queen called on there most trusted friend and shapeshifter Kachiri and asked her that she take star, sterne and her own daughter Quinn away from the kingdom to protect her until she is of the right age to return.They also asked that they do not tell star, sterne about them oder who she is until she thinks she is ready but they also gave Kachiri a warning that if star, sterne finds out who she is to early star, sterne will be attacked Von like the creature at the ball on this night.

Find out what became of star, sterne in chapter one
i am waiting for requests to write chapter one and Mehr as this is only the preface.

AnonymousXXX, Team_Edward77 and 4 others like this

rheiicullen_78 wait .... it's a story about Edward and Bella right?? or am I wrong???

house_of_nightx nope its not a story about edward and bella imy own one i have written i just put it up to see what people think because this is only the preface not the whole book

SarBear1579 aweeesssomme (Thanks for reading mine BTW) Very COOL

house_of_nightx its cool urs was awsome

mcs50 I liked and would love to read more :)

house_of_nightx i have just finished writing my first chapter so u can read it now hope u like it!

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thoughts

posted by bluemc24

As I lay on the steps ,my head in Alice's lap,
I realised I Liebe her Mehr thn my own life, and maybe Bella was right. I might be over protective, but if Alice''s life ended,
so would mine. I would not live without her. Before I knew her I thought me life was ok,
but now I've met her I would never dream of going back to my life before her.
just then, i imagined the image of her tiny body
fighting a newborn.
the thought made me shudder. maybe like Wölfe Vampire could imprint, carlisle and esme, rosealie and emmet, me and alice. i woud of finished that thought if alice hadn't started talking to herself and mumbling about the pictures being striaght but not straight anough.....

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The Loss (chapter one)

posted by a-jforever

Ok so this is my new fanfic. Please tell me what Du think of it.XX

“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started Singen her favourite song startling Flo.

“Whoa easy.” I sagte taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my...

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the follow up to a beautiful death part 12

posted by xroylex

"what is it? whats happened?" i found myself worring about them both in the same way and not just friend worring about another friend and ex lover worring about the one she loves i found myself worring like i loved them both. in the same way. what did that mean? i didnt have time to drell on that this instence. as alice was still talking.
"its the fight Du carnt be in it nessie" she could see i was about to argue again. but she carried on s[eaking."you carnt be in it beacuse i see that if your there then blake is going to come looking for Du and is going to get hurt Von trying to get to you...

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Blackout!!! Part 11

posted by smileyfaceddude

Cynddylans marble face was pinching into a grimace. His, now, burgundy eyes were all sad and in them held…quilt? He missed his sister, my brain told me. I never have had a brother oder sister, and never will. If I ever had one, it would bring me into great sadness, if we didn’t live together, oder Liebe each other. Cynddylan obviously wanted his sister back. “Do Du miss her?” I sagte in a very quiet whisper. He just looked up, his eyes no longer sad, and said, “Question me.” I was annoyed that he didn’t answer and that he changed the subject, but I did what he said. “Right, so if...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. Two~ [THREE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Two
BuffyFaithfan1
____________________
[THREE]
    "Let's take her to the Room." Tabra sagte and Haus lead the way.
    "I counted seven in that room," Tabra whispered. I nodded.
    "Welcome to my new, refurbished Room." There were weapons along the walls, and there were even a few tortured people laying on the ground almost dead. It reeked of fish. Ew. "Put Cydnee in the chair."
    The chair lay in the middle of the Room, and it was blood stained, with a bullet hole in the back of it....

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. Two~ [TWO]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Two
BuffyFaithfan1
_______________________
[TWO]
"WHAT!?" A deep voice called, and someone ran to the stairs and looked up at us. "Ahhh...my target Cydnee." He had a smile on his face, and he looked creepy.
    "Let go of me Du jerk!" I sagte and Haus laughed.
    "When will Du learn?" Tabra asked me and started down the steps.
    "LET ME GO!" I shouted and struggeled, but his grip tightened.
    "Nice to see Du again, Tabra." Haus said. "I knew you'd return."
    "Well,...

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Stephenie Meyer not turned on Von vampires.........

posted by Hellohoudini

Per Stephenie during a Fan interview 6/22/2010

Question..."What about Midnight Sun?"

Anwser..."I know that’s what everyone cares about. I also know that the right answer would be for me to say “Oh yah, it’s done! And it’ll be out Weiter month!” But that’s not true. It’s also not true that I’ve got a ton of work done on it, and that’s what I’m working on. What’s true is that I’m really burned out on vampires. And, I don’t want to write it badly. So I want to wait until I’m excited about the material again, and I’m excited about Edward, and that it’s something that’s...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death [THREE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
____________________________
[THREE]
"Okay, so I've had a messer thrown at my head, and now a poisonous sandwhich!? How am I suppossed to do anything around my house without any paranoia of everything being a death trap!?" I asked Tabra.
"I'm not sure. But Du are right about that guy knowing where Du live. The only other way I can think of a safe, sicher strategy is to come live with me in the spare bedroom." Tabra sat on the couch and I stayed standing.
"Really?"
"Yea, I don't mind. I would just leave now, Du never know if this place is rigged with...

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the follow up to a beautiful death part 4

posted by xroylex

"nessie? ness? RENESMEE!!!" i hadnt realised someone was calling my name ontil the sound was right Weiter to me.
"oh sorry alice i still had my headphones in whats up?"
"well there is a little thing happerning tonight and yeah i guess its called SCHOOL!" oh crap she was right
"how long?" i asked allready gettin up.
"30 Minuten which gives me time to make Du beautiful" she grinned and i smiled back.

she worked on every part of me from my hair which she left long and flowing curly down my back. and also i made sure she didnt die it again she left it Schokolade brown just like mums. (who was my sister...

Borrowed lives XVI

posted by Tatti

"Who?" I didn't know what expression I had, but I definitely couldn't feel my body. I stared at Alice without blinking, but she avoided my gaze.
"Everyone" she whispered.
"We will lose?!" I squeaked.
"No, not that" she still didn't look at me. What her words mean then? "With your help I saw Mehr possible variants of the future than I ever could see. But in all visions we Lost someone. Sometimes it was one of the wolves, sometimes one of us, sometimes it was..."
"Me?" I asked calmly and she nodded. I was surprised that her words about my possible death didn't scare me much. After all I already knew...

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Robert Pattinson Not a 'Twihard,'

posted by Hellohoudini

Robert Pattinson Not a 'Twihard,' Saw 'Twilight' for The First Time 'A Few Days Ago'

by Joe Lynch · June 14, 2010

With the third installment in the Twilight series hitting theaters June 30, those still unfamiliar with the phenomenon might be finally getting caught up on what they've been missing. While "Twihards" (diehard Fans of the vampire series) may find it surprising that anyone could miss out on their beloved saga, they'll probably be even Mehr surprised to find out who is among the uninitiated: Edward Cullen himself.

Yep, "Twilight" antihero, Robert Pattinson has admitted that, until quite...

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Blackout!!! Part 9

posted by smileyfaceddude

Bella

We had travelled to and from countries and now we were in Wales. It was raining (perfect weather for vampires) and cold. It didn’t matter because we were immune to feeling it, I was just so sick of looking for Renesmee. I just wanted to see her running to me and hugging me. I missed her so much. Edward had done his best to cheer me up but even he was finding it hard. I also felt sorry for Jacob. He was the most depressed; he had a permanent grimace on his russet face. Occasionally, I would see a girl across the street, think it was Renesmee and try and dash for the Zufällig girl, but Edward...

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Young Love.CH.6

posted by decullen

Alice walked over to me and shot her arms around me.When she let go,she past me the test.I gasped.It`s positive.I`m pregnant.I started crying.I walked down stair.Everyone was looking at me again.

"I pregnant."I sagte and put my hands on my stomach.Rose and Esme ran to me and hugged me.Edward shook his head.He came over and hugged me.

"Bella,we`ll sort this out.We`ll get it out."He said.What?

"What?Get it out.It is our unborn baby.Why would I kill our baby."I screamed at him.I could feel the anger building up.

"Bella,.."He started to say.

"NO!"I screamed."You will make the package.But Du wont keep...

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Talent Part 3

posted by CarlislesLover

Please comment.xx

When I arrived they were both standing face to face arguing.
“You blonde slag”

“Brown bitch”

“Piss off and get a life”

“Why don’t you”

“No I have a life unlike somebody”

“Umm no Du don’t, you’ve been in a coffin for the last few decades”

“You’re arms disappearing, maybe its old age”

“Hahaha very funny, I’m not old!”

“Yes Du are”

“Well my little friend I suggest Du piss off now”

“Since when am I your friend”

“STOP NOW BOTH OF YOU”

“Sorry Bella”

“That’s ok Rosalie”

“Oh so Rosalie’s perfect now”

“No”

“Blonde”

“Alice...

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Borrowed lifes VIII

posted by Tatti

When I woke up, it was already dark. I tried to get up but noticed that I was in hospital: the bed, the drip, the equipment around me - all medical stuff so I had to be a hospital. But then Carlisle came in and I recognized the glass wall. Am I still at their house?
"How are Du feeling?" and he started checking my blood pressure.
"I have a headache but everything else seems fine" I sagte concentrating on my sensations "How long have I been unconscious?"
"For a long time - about 7 hours. I even scanned your brain but there was nothing unusual. Did Du ever had any head traumas?"
"No... I don't...

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Paris Hilton wants to steal Robert Pattinson from Kristen Stewart

posted by Hellohoudini

June 10, 2010 09:48 PM EDT

It seems that Kristen Stewart isn't the only one who thinks that Robert Pattinson is hot. Yes, I know that millions of women everywhere know this, but I'm talking about celebrity woman. There's one very well known celeb chica who wants to datum Rob Pattinson and keep him to herself. Supposedly Paris Hilton has a thing for R-Patz. That's right, Paris has been saying lately that she thinks Rob is such a hottie and would like to datum him.

After the MTV Movie Awards, Paris tweeted: “Rob and Taylor are so hot!” Presumably she's talking about Robert Pattinson and Taylor...

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Borrowed lifes VII

posted by Tatti

I didn't like any option they suggested me. Money for my silence? No, if I'll choose not tell anything it won't be because of a bribe. Silence without money? I was really considering it cause there was a huge risk people would start calling me insane and lock me in a cell. Who today, in this modern world would believe that there are existing creatures that doesn't age? But if I'll decide to expose them anyway, what will be the consequences? How this world is going to change? And what will they do to me? I knew that a few of them wanted me dead, so saying "I will not cooperate with you" will...

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Blackout!!! Part 8

posted by smileyfaceddude

Renesmee

My herz skipped a beat, my head spun and my breathing fastened. I looked at him as if I had never seen him before. It was like he was speaking a foreign language. “Well, when,” I had to take a deep breath. I need to stay calm. “When did this happen?” He was looking at the silk duvet, tracing the patterns with one long, pointy, pallid finger. I put my hand on it and he looked up. “Not long, just a few days.” He confessed in a sad tone. His earlier crimson eyes had turned to scarlet. I couldn’t think why. Maybe it’s the light? I thought. “I’m sorry about what I said...

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Eclipse Revision (jakes pov of chpt. 10. Scent.) pt 1

posted by LexisFaith

Thanks to all of Du who are reading. This is the first part of Chapter 10. Scent in Eclipse. I wrote it in Jake's pov. TAHNKS AGAIN :)
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Bella doubting my mad skills kind of stung. I took down Laurent with ease. I was just comming to sniff her house out. Geez.
I left the Rabbit at Home and decided to run. It was not only easier, but also faster. And I wanted to see Bella for as long as the leech would let me.
As I neared her house I could smell the overly sweet scent of Edward. Ugh. I scrunched my nose and listened.
"It's not that I feel any personal...

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New Moon (my revision)

posted by LexisFaith

I closed my eyes and listened as the waves hit the rocks below. I could almost taste the salt in the air. I took a deep breath and opened my eyes.
"Don't do this." He stood beside me holding my wrist. But now, not even he could stop me.
"I can't take it anymore." I told him. "I have had all I can handle and it stops here."
"Bella, Love-" He pleaded.
"Don't call me Love. Du left me remember. Shouldn't Du have seen this comming?"
I took off my jacke and layed it on the bolder beside me.
"Put it back on and leave." He was despret. He shouldn't have left me like this. He should have known.
"I love...