Please Kommentar and tell me what Du think. -Twilimpian =)
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Jacob and I were walking down the strand in La Push. There wasn't much to see in Forks so he suggested I see La Push. The air was filled with the scent of salt water. It was a beautiful strand and the peace of walking down it had gotten to me. Suddenly I was happy I'd moved here, if not oder the beach, because I'd met Jacob. Jacob was very easy to talk to he loved to make jokes and fool around and at the same time he was intense and thoughtful. “So how old are you... like 16 oder 17 ?” I asked him. Jacob laughed.
“No I actually just turned 16.” He told me, looking pleased with himself. Wow, i thought. Jacob looked very mature for his age there was no way i could have guessed that he was only 16. An abrupt sound interrupted my thoughts, no it was Mehr of an animal's howl. I jumped at the loud noise. Jacob suddenly had a panicked expression on his face. “Um, it was nice to meet Du Bella but I have to go” he pulled out a map from the back pocket of his jeans. “Here follow the green line, and you'll be back home.” He told me before running into the forest. I slowly walked back to my car trying to imagine where Jacob had went in the forest. But I kept on coming up blank.
Soon enough I found my car it was parked on a gravel road across from a deserted meadow. Just as I opened the door to my car I felt a breeze around me. Not only did I feel a breeze, I could have sworn I saw somebody walk right Von me. But the gravel road along with the meadow were still deserted. I shook my head figuring I was just imagining things and sat down in the driver sitz of the car before closing the door. I placed the key into the ignition and my truck roared to life. That was when I saw something from the corner of my eye. I turned to see someone in the passenger seat. I could not hold it in I screamed! But the passenger Weiter to me covered my mouth with a pale, freezing cold hand. It was a male, with blondish hair... probably around the age of 20. He was beautiful, but with pale with golden eyes.
There was a knock on the window and within Sekunden there were six Mehr people surrounding my car each with the same pale face and golden eyes all around the ages of 20 oder 30. “Jasper, No!” they were all yelling at different times. There was a loud noise that caused them all to whip their heads around. Suddenly all six of them gasped, all but the one Weiter to me who still held my gaze.
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Jacob and I were walking down the strand in La Push. There wasn't much to see in Forks so he suggested I see La Push. The air was filled with the scent of salt water. It was a beautiful strand and the peace of walking down it had gotten to me. Suddenly I was happy I'd moved here, if not oder the beach, because I'd met Jacob. Jacob was very easy to talk to he loved to make jokes and fool around and at the same time he was intense and thoughtful. “So how old are you... like 16 oder 17 ?” I asked him. Jacob laughed.
“No I actually just turned 16.” He told me, looking pleased with himself. Wow, i thought. Jacob looked very mature for his age there was no way i could have guessed that he was only 16. An abrupt sound interrupted my thoughts, no it was Mehr of an animal's howl. I jumped at the loud noise. Jacob suddenly had a panicked expression on his face. “Um, it was nice to meet Du Bella but I have to go” he pulled out a map from the back pocket of his jeans. “Here follow the green line, and you'll be back home.” He told me before running into the forest. I slowly walked back to my car trying to imagine where Jacob had went in the forest. But I kept on coming up blank.
Soon enough I found my car it was parked on a gravel road across from a deserted meadow. Just as I opened the door to my car I felt a breeze around me. Not only did I feel a breeze, I could have sworn I saw somebody walk right Von me. But the gravel road along with the meadow were still deserted. I shook my head figuring I was just imagining things and sat down in the driver sitz of the car before closing the door. I placed the key into the ignition and my truck roared to life. That was when I saw something from the corner of my eye. I turned to see someone in the passenger seat. I could not hold it in I screamed! But the passenger Weiter to me covered my mouth with a pale, freezing cold hand. It was a male, with blondish hair... probably around the age of 20. He was beautiful, but with pale with golden eyes.
There was a knock on the window and within Sekunden there were six Mehr people surrounding my car each with the same pale face and golden eyes all around the ages of 20 oder 30. “Jasper, No!” they were all yelling at different times. There was a loud noise that caused them all to whip their heads around. Suddenly all six of them gasped, all but the one Weiter to me who still held my gaze.
That night in Edwards arms I was sobbing. We heard a knock at the door. “Go away” Edward said. “Its me Jacob can I please come in Bella?”. Edward looked at me I just nodded. “Come in” Edward said. He just looked horrible I immediately sagte “sorry”. He sagte it was okay he was fine. He just wanted to see if I was okay and that Nessie wanted to talk to me. I sagte okay. “Momma I'm sorry........I'm sorry Du don't want me” “Now Nessie stop being ridiculous, thats not what I meant I was just......having fun if I knew I would have the most prettiest daughter in the whole inter world I wold have tried with all my might....... Edward go check on Jacob”.Then he left.
i party like vampere,parying pricher. walkin down stiars in my hundred doller snikers.
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ok so this is my first stoy so please Kommentar and tell me if Du want me to continue and if Du have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the Weiter thing i knew he was on oben, nach oben of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward sagte angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i sagte through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are Du and what do Du want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmin im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i sagte guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the Weiter thing i knew he was on oben, nach oben of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward sagte angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i sagte through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are Du and what do Du want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmin im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i sagte guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.