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Today is a landmark for Twilight Fans because Eclipse, the third installment of the Twilight Series, has finally hit theatres.

I have had the opportunity to see it twice and counting. I have to agree with the critics when I say, “Eclipse was the best ‘Twilight’ yet.” It definitely was. Not only did the cinematography add to the film’s richness, but the elements from the book were captured on film. This film brought the book it was based on to life. This film was the only movie that was successful in that aspect.

All in all, I loved the movie! I thought it stuck very close to the book, way closer than the Zurück Filme had. Of course I had my quirks though. I will share my positives and my negatives. I will not go through every scene because this would be a really long review if I did. Haha

DIRECTOR:

I felt the need to write a small paragraph about the new director. When Slade was chosen as director, many people were worried, including me. Yes, David Slade brought darkness to the film. However, he brought it to a realistically, dark level. And what I liked about Slade's direction is that he did not try and follow the directors before him. Continuity is there, but he made the movie his own. The film is tainted with his unique touch, and Du can obviously see it in the film. The tone of the movie, the wide-shots, everything is "Slade-copyrighted". We haven't seen these camera movements in the other films before, and I thought Slade did a fantastic job: with the actors, with the cameras, and with the movie.

CINEMATOGRAPHY:

The cinematography was absolutely gorgeous. From the landscapes to the tone of the movie, everything was beautiful. The movie was very visually dynamic and the coloring was incredible. The different angles, whether wide shots oder close shots, they fit with the scene they were in. I will go into specifics when I am talking about certain scenes. To wickeln, wickeln sie up this portion of the review, I reiterate what I sagte about him in the paragraph above: David Slade did an amazing job with the camera work. I would even use the word artistic. He had some unique shots, which I am excited to talk about later on.

****Obviously, Spoilers from here on out****

SCENES:

I would give a play Von play review, but I am afraid I would mess up the order of scenes, so I will review them in the order in which I loved the most. This is very hard for me to do considering I have many Favorit scenes in this movie :) I can say that two and three are tied. I can’t decide which one I like better!

1)Edward Proposing to Bella. This scene was absolutely beautiful. I loved how similar Edward’s bedroom in Twilight and Edward’s bedroom in Eclipse were. They were two completely different houses in two completely different locations and I was very impressed. The color of his room, the golden glow fit the scene so well. It added intimacy. This scene was all about them. When Edward gave Bella the herz charm, I do wish it was longer, and I do wish the whole “I thought it was a good representation” talk was in there, but the scene is amazing nonetheless. I will not gush about the kissing/leg hitch in this scene too much, but I must Kommentar that it was insanely…passionate. The emotion in the scene was building and flowing and that’s one element that I loved. Of course, Sia’s My Love song placement was perfect and fit hand in hand with this scene and helped the crescendo of emotions. The camera movements flowed and intertwined with the melodies. It was like having an instrumental song with the scene. I would not have had any other song playing during this scene. I wish this scene was longer, but maybe that’s just me being greedy. :)

I loved how Edward explained how he’s from a different era. I Liebe how he told her the steps in which he would have made her his if they were living in his time. “I would have courted you. We would have taken chaperoned strolls and had ice tee on the porch. I may have stolen a KISS oder two. But only after asking your father’s permission… I would have gotten down on one knee and would have presented Du with a ring…” I absolutely loved that. And after Bella accepted Edward’s proposal, she jumped into his arms and he spun her around and embraced her…I could not have asked for a better and Mehr touching proposal.

2)Edward and Bella’s First Scene in the Meadow. I’m going to start sounding like a broken record, but the way this scene was shot was remarkable! The lighting, the ethereal feel of it, the magic of the meadow…it was the meadow from the book. The interaction between Edward and Bella in this scene was such an improvement from the Zurück films. People seem to forget that Edward and Bella have light moments in the books, but this scene shows, they most certainly have fun at times :) Edward playfully whispering in her ear, breathing around her neck, playing with her hair… he was the Edward from the books. Du feel the closeness, the connection, the Liebe between them. Nothing heavy in this scene.

3)Edward vs. Victoria/Riley. What else can I say other than epic? David Slade sagte in an interview that he wanted Edward to be dark. He wanted to Zeigen the audience a dark Edward. He succeeded. “You won’t get another chance like this again! Du want her! Du want me to feel the pain Du felt when I killed James! When I tore him to pieces. When I turned him into ash. When I turned him into nothing.” He was taunting her. He was playing on her feelings, her motivation. Once she set off, he crouched and they fought. Once he went for the kill, he bit her neck, then beheaded her. It’s one of my Favorit scenes because it shows that Edward is capable of fighting too. And that he’s Mehr than capable of doing anything for Bella, even if it means him risking his life for her. However, the addition they made, Bella cutting herself with a rock, I loved it. Because… nothing says “I Liebe you” Mehr than having the will to risk your life for a person. Upon Lesen the script, I was a little wary. I did not know if that idea was so great, but it turned out well. I have nothing bad to say about this scene.

And small Requisiten to Xavier Samuels. He played Riley really well, especially since the character is small. He made me feel… bad for Riley throughout the movie. And applauds Bryce Dallas Howard. The task of continuing Victoria must have been daunting to her. She knows the Fan base and how hardcore they can be at times. People doubted her ability. I did not like that Rachelle was replaced, but I was positive Bryce would do a great job. And she did. The book says Victoria was feline like. A sweet, soft voice. Like a child. They both had great chemistry and they took their characters and embodied them. Give Bryce Dallas Howard a chance. She’s not half bad.

4)The Tent Scene. A lot of Edward and Bella Fans will tell Du they hated this part in the book. Of course I am not too fond of Jacob’s Fantasy thoughts, nor do I Liebe the idea that Edward is just sitting there, feeling completely helpless. Well, I am one of the few that loved this chapter. The movie wasn’t nearly as specific as the book, but the scene played out well. In this scene, Edward’s thoughts are revealed to the audience like in the book. The conversation vaguely mentions Edward’s reason for leaving [in New Moon]. I do wish they had Mehr of the “four options” speech though. And it’s revealed that Edward would let Bella go if she were to choose someone else. The reason why I Liebe this scene so much is because Edward never had a chance to explain himself in New Moon. He did in the book, but not in the movie, unfortunately. But, we see what he went through. Rob played this really well. Du could see all the emotions on his face. He was completely disgusted with what he is. He was disgusted that he could not do anything to help Bella because of what he was. Rob did an excellent job with this.

And another reason why I absolutely love this scene is that it shows how much of a man Edward is. He stays classy. Jacob asks Edward “How did Du cope?” Edward Antworten “There are no words. But I wouldn’t wish it on anyone, Jacob.” Also, Jacob asks Edward “Would Du try and kill me?” Edward Antworten “That’s an intriguing idea…but no. I could not hurt her like that.” I Liebe that the audience can finally catch a glimpse of who Edward is and that he solely lives for Bella. How he would do anything for her, how he wants her to stay human and have a human life. She’s his “reason for existing”. In the other movies, Edward has sagte he wants her to stay human, but this scene, there’s an undeniable honesty there. Du cannot doubt him.

The scene in the movie compared to the book? Similar. The gist of the chapter wrapped into five minutes. I would have liked Mehr conversation between them like in the book, but we cannot have everything. :)

5)Fight Training. This scene was so fun to watch. It changed a little from the book though. It was supposed to be dark, however, I liked the change they made. I think if they put darker tones in this scene, it would not have been so great. We can actually see what they are doing. I liked Jasper demonstrating how to fight. He would fight Emmett, and then give a tip. In Emmett’s case, “Never lose focus.” Edward vs. Carlisle was adorable. I loved their relationship in the book so much and I loved that we got to see it on screen. When they were fighting, Edward was… smiling. He was “fighting with dad” and I thought it added to their father-son relationship rather well. Once Edward smashed Carlisle to the ground, which looked amazing Von the way, Jasper gave another tip, “Never turn your back on your enemy.” Rosalie vs. Jasper was cute since it was playful “sibling rivalry”. I loved how Rosalie smiled when she was on the ground. And Alice vs. Jasper, I am glad Alice and Jasper Fans got a couple of cute moments between them. I loved how they showed Alice. She was cunning, but playful. Like she should be. Again, I do wish this scene was longer, but that’s just me being greedy again :)

6)Graduation. This might be surprising, but I really enjoyed the graduation scene. From Jessica’s speech to the after party, I really enjoyed it. I appreciated the fact that during the graduation ceremony, it focused on Bella, Charlie, Edward, and Carlisle and Esme. When we see Bella accept her diploma, and Charlie stands up and claps… it makes my herz melt. Du can see how proud he is of her, almost on the brink of tears. And Carlisle and Esme share a smile of appreciation for each other during the speech after we see Edward. I think the reason why I Liebe this particular section of the scene is because I graduated this year, and it brought me back to that. I was in tears in this scene. “This isn’t the time to make hard and fast decisions. It’s the time to make mistakes. Take the wrong train and get stuck somewhere chill. Fall in love…a lot. Major in philosophy ‘cause there’s no way to make a career out of that. Change your mind. Then change it again, because nothing is permanent…”

The after party, when the Cullens, Jacob, Embry, and Quil were gathered in a room talking about teaming up to save Forks, I liked what Jacob had to say at the end. “Bella…this is was we do. Du should be happy. This is what Du wanted. Us… working together.” Something along those lines. In the movie, Jacob Lost his edginess. I specifically remember in the book, Jacob sounded cocky and had an “it’s stupid for Du to worry” attitude, but this line sufficed I guess.

7)“Something's Wrong." This is such a little scene, but I Liebe this scene. Bella returns Home from seeing Jacob for the first time. Once inside, there is a knock on the door. Edward appears and he begins to tell her how worried he was and how close he was to breaking the treaty… then he stops. He has this look on his face. A look of fear. He runs up to Bella’s room and touches her dream catcher. “Edward, what’s wrong?” The way he says, “someone’s been in here” is so chilling. I do not know what it is. It is how I imagined it in the book. There is nothing Mehr Wird angezeigt in his eyes other than fear and concern for Bella’s safety. Not a big scene, but it spoke volume.

8)The Clearing. I loved the scene where Bella and Edward, Jasper, and Jacob were gathered in the clearing talking about scents. I thought it was cute. All the bantering. When Jacob picks Bella up and Edward plainly says, “Run.” Mehr chills.

9)Victoria On the Treaty. The reason why I Liebe this scene so much is the Cullens’ desire to catch Victoria to save Bella. Du can hear it in their voice. When they are chasing her and she nears the Treaty line, Esme shouts “She’ll get away!” I loved that. I do not know what it was. Just the fact that she was so desperate to catch Victoria and that unknown fierceness. We have never seen that in Esme before. It was a nice touch.

POSITIVES:

--Eclipse. The ‘Eclipse’ Titel screen. I really have nothing Mehr to say other than absolutely beautiful.

--The Make-Up. It is so much better in this film. Edward does not look old. He looks so young. He actually looks like a seventeen Jahr old, which is a good thing! Since there are a lot of close ups, I am glad we could not see the powder on his face.

--Seth Clearwater. The boy is too cute. Even though he had a minimal character, I loved his character just like in the book. I did miss him and Edward’s friendship. I really liked that in the book. I also missed their fist pumpe when they killed Riley and Victoria, but he was adorable nonetheless and it was nice to see him on screen.

--The Wolves. Their characters were shown through the wolves. Du could actually tell which wolf was which. The actors’ features were resembled in the CGI wolves. Big thumbs up to the art and graphics department.

--The Ice/White Granite Effect. In New Moon, we see the Vampire being torn apart and they were like stone. In Eclipse, we see plenty of Vampire being torn apart, but they were like ice oder white granite. I really liked that. It showed how hard and cold the Vampire are.

--The Sets. David Slade sagte he was gegeben pretty much free reigns about the set as far as continuity. I think he did a great job recreating Bella’s room and Edward’s room, let alone the Cullen’s whole house, especially the stairs to his room. I thought the resemblance between the Twilight house to the Eclipse house was amazing. It looked the same! Such a beautiful house.

NEGATIVES:

--The Wigs. My goodness, some of them were just awful. Bella’s wig was okay in some scenes, but in certain scenes, it was very distracting. The oben, nach oben of her head would be flat at times. Jasper’s wig… he always ends up with bad hair in the movies. However, during his flashback, we see him riding in the desert… his wig looked amazing there because of his hat. Victoria’s wig was pretty obvious, but it did not take away anything from Bryce’s performance.

--The Jacob/Bella Kiss. Before Du all say anything, I did not write this off as negative because I Liebe Edward and Bella. I put this in the “negatives” because it seemed awkward. I am sure it was for the actors, but the awkwardness was just leaking off the screen. I did not feel anything. Nothing like I did in the book. I was angry when I read the book. I was angry at Bella, but in the movie, I was not angry at her, I was just irritated that the KISS was going on for so long. Lol. The scenery was beautiful, but I felt the KISS to be awkward. Du can disagree, but I did not feel the passion the book described. Jacob did not grab her violently. I thought the KISS would have been Mehr heated. I was prepared for it. But it turns out, I did not need to be.

--Angry Edward. I did not know where to put this, so I put it in the ‘negatives’ just because I would miss the change. I liked the change; however, I am also sad that he was not as calm as in the books. In the books, when Bella calls him up and tells him about Jacob’s forced kiss, he arrives at her house and checks her hand first. Then he walks up to Jacob and calmly threatens him. In a way, it could have been Mehr chilling. I did miss that, but this way worked too.

--Angry Bella. I wish Bella became Mehr irritated with Jacob. It seemed that she did not really lash out at him as much as in the book. I missed her asking Edward to kill Jacob, however, Edward, being the gentleman that he is, would say it would bother her in the morning. I wish they showed Mehr of that, Mehr of Bella’s disgust when Jacob kissed her the first time.

--The Last Scene. A big problem. In Breaking Dawn, after Bella has become a vampire, she says that she knows it was her destiny to be with Edward and to become a vampire. In Breaking Dawn. Not in Eclipse. When Bella is talking to Edward in their meadow in the last scene in the movie, Bella says that it was not just a choice between Edward and Jacob, but between who she is and who she should be. “I’ve always felt…out of step. Literally, stumbling through life. I’ve never felt normal. But now I know. I’m not normal. And I don’t want to be. I’ve faced death and Lost and pain in your world. But I’ve also never felt stronger, Mehr real… Mehr myself. Because it’s my world, too, Edward. It’s where I belong.” And then says “You’re saying… that it’s not all about me.” Bella smiling, simply says “Sorry. No.” It has everything to do with him.

Page 267 of Eclipse says that “Forever means nothing without you.” The quote I provided from the movie, where Bella is talking about not fitting in, it is sounding like she just wants to be a vampire with powers. It comes off as shallow and superficial and completely and entirely out of canon. During Eclipse promotion, Kristen had sagte that the ending scene was to Zeigen that Bella is also choosing for herself. She is not just running off with the guy. She is choosing to be with Edward and choosing, for herself, to be a vampire. And I do not get that. This had the potential to ruin the entire movie for me because this is what the movie, the book is about. Bella’s immortality and her conscious decision to be with Edward. Solely for Edward. Being with Edward means becoming a vampire, and she is willing to make that sacrifice because she loves him that much. Forever means nothing without him.

ACTORS:

--Kristen Stewart. All in all, I think she did an okay job. I do wish she had Mehr enthusiasm in certain scenes. However, I think she portrayed Bella well in this movie. Better than the Zurück movies. I like what Kristen brings to Bella. And that is inner will power and strength. We all know Bella is motivated and has a strong will in the books, but I Liebe that Kristen enforces that a little more. She does not make Bella as weak as she is in the book. She evens out the field. In the books, Du can tell Bella is completely different and out of sync with everyone. But in the movies, it is Mehr believable.

--Robert Pattinson. I Liebe how Rob plays Edward. Even though Edward in the Bücher and the Filme are a little different, the scripts change the character, not Rob. But I Liebe how Rob plays Edward. Just like the book describes Edward, “the emotions flash across his face”… Du can see that when Rob plays him. I appreciate that. Rob understands his character. He understands that Edward is flawed. He understands that Edward can be over-protective, but he also understands that he only acts that way to keep her alive. That her “existence is everything”. He knows that Bella is the only person he wishes, he needs to protect. He comprehends that even though Edward is one hundred years old, long past human, Bella brings out the human in him. Bella brings out the 17 Jahr old in him. He grasps the fact that even though Edward is disgusted Von himself and what he is, maybe he has been too hard on himself. Because, how could someone like Bella be capable of loving someone like him if he was truly the despicable creature he thought he was? Rob knows that Edward accepts the fact that he is a vampire, but he also accepts the fact that Bella loves him because he chooses to be better. To become the best he can be.

--Taylor Lautner. Taylor’s portrayal of Jacob is lighter in the movie than it is in the books. I appreciate his enthusiasm and his Liebe for Jacob, but sometimes, Jacob’s other qualities need to be shown. During New Moon promotion, Taylor had been speaking about Jacob’s pre-transformation/post-transformation side, but I have yet to see a massive difference between the two. In the books, Du can tell Jacob is different. He is a lot rougher and Mehr edgy. In the movies, we hardly see his ignorance. It’s part of his character, and I am disappointed that we do not see it. During the scenes where Jacob is trying to convince Bella to choose him, the scene in the garage, his Schauspielen is awkward. Dramatic pauses and he do not mix well. I do like how he sagte “He probably can’t even KISS Du without hurting you. Feel that? Flesh and blood and warmth.” Despite what ‘team’ I am on, Taylor did act that one line pretty well. Other than that, I could not help but feel awkwardness leaking off the screen.

Now, we have finally reached the end of the review. It ended up being longer than I originally thought. I restate what I sagte at the beginning of the review, over all, I loved the movie. The movie had the herz the book did. The feelings, the magic was captured in the film. David Slade recently sagte in an MTV interview, “You can have the best actors in the world and the best cinematographers in the world. But if Du don’t have a solid story, then Du don’t have a film.” And he is absolutely right. Without a solid story, the film would be dead. I very much like David Slade and have grown to Liebe him and what he has done for the Twilight Fans Von blessing us with a movie such as this one. I really respect him as a director and I hope everyone shares my thoughts regarding him. He knows his stuff. Aspiring film directors should take notes from him and what he says. Because a lot of what he says rings true.

I hoped Du liked my review :) Kommentare are welcome!
posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

I was now the human equivalent of six months pregnant, and watching a small grey shape moving on a monitor. My child. My little baby.

My mom, Esme, and Jacob were here with me too. Aside from Carlisle, of course.

"There he is. Speaking of which, I presume Du and Jacob would like to know the gender?" Carlisle asked. I didn't immediately answer. I was too mesmerized.

"Renesmee?" Jacob asked me.
"Yes," I managed to say.

"You have a little girl. Well, not yet, but Du will."

A little girl.

Esme sighed contentedly, almost as fascinated as I was.

From downstairs, Alice squealed.

Alice had...
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posted by AdaLove
**Jacob was born to Billy and Sarah Black. Sarah died in a car crash when he was very young. Jacob remembers Bella from when they were younger, though she does not remember him.**

**********Twilight*************

He has a small but very important role in this book. After Bella schwan flirts with him (as a way to get information),
he introduces the idea of Edward Cullen being a vampire Von telling her Quileute legends. According to Stephenie Meyer via her official website, Jacob was originally just a device to tell Bella about the "Cold Ones".However, both she and her editor liked Jacob so much that...
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posted by renesmeblack
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Renesmee



How could he? The Liebe of my life, now ready to rip the thing I feel I MUST keep away from me. I could hear sobs outside the door. I could hear sobs inside this room. We were both hurt. Before he closed the door, I threw something unthinkingly at him. It's now outside with him right now. It's something that probably hurt him Mehr than anything else in the whole world. It was my ring. I was now crying. I felt naked without it. My herz felt ripped to shreds. It felt like a werewolf clawed at it. It probably looked like the half of Emily's face, only it may never heal.

Jacob

I started...
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posted by twilight-7
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
I half opened my eyes, wondering what the hell was beeping so loudly.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
Was that my alarm? I reached out to turn it off. I didn’t need to wake up; I had no school to go to. I touched a square box that was way too big to be my alarm and didn’t feel like anything that should be in my room.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.
I opened my eyes fully and almost screamed when I saw where I was. I wasn’t in my room. I was in a room but it wasn’t mine. It was too clean and full of medical equipment. I was in hospital. There was a drip Weiter to...
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posted by Bella_Cullen902
Hey!!! This is my first Story so take it easy!! Please comment!! And I'll shut up now!!


I tried to call Jacob today...no luck. I don't know what to do, ever since the Cullens came back he hasn't talked to me. Jake wont answer the phone when i call and when somebody does pick up, Billy usually says that he's not Home oder that he's asleep.

But tody was different. When i called Billy picked up and sagte "Jake doesn't want to talk to right now Bella. Sorry." Then the line went dead.

Edward say not to worry about it. That he'll get over it...eventually.

Me and Edward were in my room. He was laying across...
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It was dark outside, and I was in my room, finishing off some homework. My C.D player was on loud as I worked, but that didn’t matter. I was the only one in. It was late, around 10; 45pm, but I wasn’t tired. Mum and Dad had gone up to Grandpa Carlisle and Grandma Esme’s house to talk with everyone about something important. They had suggested I stay Home and study. It was a huge surprise when Jacob turned up.
“Whoa Jake, it’s you!”
“Oh my God, really?!” he laughed, and I found myself laughing too.
“What I mean is; why are Du here at nearly eleven pm when my parents are out?...
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posted by renesmeblack
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Jacob





"Helluva way to spend your birthday, Ness," Emmett joked. WHAT?!!! It's Renesmee's BIRTHDAY?
"I'm surprised," Edward whipered across the room to me.
"I was busy!" I yelled back. Renesmee looked at us as though we were going crazy. I got up from the corner I was in and sat Weiter to Renesmee. I looked at Edward warily.
"Hey, at least you're not Mark," he said. I laughed and kissed Nessie's nose.
"Okay, we need to figure out how much this vortex'll grow until Mark returns," Heram sagte as he flew back into the room. "Cullens, follow me."
Nessie started to get up. I grabbed her wrist.
"Renesmee,...
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posted by renesmeblack
I flipped open my phone. Alice sounded angry on the other line.
"I saw Du returning to Forks. Why? Bella's herz won't heal in time. I see her screaming in the night right now. And yesterday I saw her do almost nothing interesting. She DID trip," Alice scolded me.
"Alice, I can't do this anymore. I can't. I-"
"Listen to me right now! If Du walk back into Bella's life, she'll kill herself. I can't believe Du want to go back, like nothing happened."
The line went dead. Most of my weird vampire dreams are reality. Bella screams in her sleep now. She'd kill herself if I ever appear. All my fault....
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posted by renesmeblack
I know most of Du girls wrote your own, I'm doing nothing original, yadda, yadda, yadda. I'm bored and had an idea that's been bothering me. What if Bella went Home crying, instead of trying to follow Edward? And what if Edward was still there? I Liebe breaking Edward's heart. Hey, I like Jacob! I can't help it! Anyways, my stories go way off track! ;-)

Now, on to the story!

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Bella was crying. I was going to run, when Bella turned away. She walked silently towards her house. I heard the faint click of the doorknob. Then I was the only one outside. The emotions fell upon me,...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Jasper-

Rosalie had been especially difficult to be around for the past few weeks.

When Edward decided to play "Let's make Rosalie really, really, mad, and see if she tries to kill us!", in particular. It was scary enough to make mortals cower in terror.

Edward was stressing over the most Kürzlich developement; namely, his daughter becoming pregnant with a human/vampire/werewolf hybrid.

Carlisle sagte it would be fine, no reason to worry, *normally indescernable medical terms* and about three months left.

Typical Tag at the Cullen residence. Du know, half vamps and Werwölfe reproducing. But...
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posted by Edward_Bella234
I'm sorry that this Artikel is really short. I'll post another later tonight.

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“How are Du feeling?” he asked in that musical voice.
    “Fine” I lied.
    “Hmm, doesn’t look fine. I think your leg is broken but I’m not positive. How did Du injure it?”
    “Well…I slipped out of a baum I was climbing” I muttered embarrassed to tell him I was a 16-year-old who still climbed trees. I chose to tell him the truth, though, rather than lie because I knew he would talk to...
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posted by _madz_
okay, big news. i have finally made a spot just for eternal night. it has articles, pictures, Links etc...
im not forcing Du to join, but it would be great for anyone who is interested. im encourging anyone to add things to the eternal night spot, any ideas are welcome :)

this is part 21, and its a little longer than usual to celebrate the new spot! enjoy :)



“Really?” I managed to get out. “Then what would be your greatest problem? That would make Victoria’s returning for Du seem like such an inconsequential matter in comparison?” I finished trying to hold onto my calm. Werewolves,...
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
"Calm down Rennesme." She says as she softly pushes me back down.

"Mom Where is Jake?" I ask again this time sitting up all the way.

"Honey he is in the other room. Grandpa is taking a look right now." Right as she finishes my grandpa walks in. His expression is grim.

"Whats going on Grandpa, whats wrong with him?" I ask with a shakey tone.

"Bella why don't Du let me talk to Rennesme. Edward is out in the hall." My mother stands up at his comand. My grandpa walks slowly towards me and sits down on the edge of the bed. "Rennesme Jacob is not healing. I think that the injury is so great that...
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Chapter 9: My Futile Attempts to Protect Her (Jake’s POV)

It was the first time ever that Nessie couldn't hold my full attention with her kiss. My mind was racing she appeared to be happy but physically she was a scary sight. Her face was gaunt after a week and a half of not eating oder sleeping right. Her eyes had circles underneath them that were so dark they were almost black; her eyes normally bright and effervescent were dull. She was so weak that she was shaking uncontrollably at times. It was Bella all over again only worse. I now was putting everything that I had on the table. My best...
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Chapter 8: What Is and What Should Never Be

My head snapped up, my attention directed away from the little cherub that I was holding. I met Emily’s eyes; they held a sisterly wisdom to them as if she was prepared to bestow some vital understanding upon me. She took a deep breath, “When Sam and I were dating I was attracted to him of course, but it was vey different from anything that I had ever experienced. It was magnetic, I couldn’t concentrate on anything except for him and he became my entire life. After we were married, we discussed having children and the Minute that I got the idea...
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Chapter 3: Feliz Sempre Após Começa Agora
Jake and I had decided to use my 16th birthday presents from my grandparents as well as the Denali coven for our honeymoon. We were going to visit Zafrina. For our wedding gift, my grandparents extended the stay Von two weeks and Tanya had switched the reservations from a hotel to a private chalet in the rain forest. We got on the plane, hand in hand. I couldn’t remember ever being happier. My family was safe, I was Mrs. Jacob Black, my father approved of it, and Jacob and I were together forever. A smile spread upon my lips at the thought. He looked...
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posted by Doopey
Here is another chapter :D



Chapter seven



Before i even turned around i knew who it was. A growl burst through my lips before i could stop it. The only reason i left was to protect them but they come here anyway.
"What are Du doing here?" I hissed at them through my teeth. My anger was slowly building up.
"Do Du really think i would miss out on a fight!" Of course Emmett was amused Von the situation. I growled at him.
Then Edwards hands ran down my arms. I knew it was him because of how my body reacted to his touch. I turn round slowly but i couldnt look into his eyes. I couldnt look and see...
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posted by Doopey
Here is the first chapter :)
i hope Du like it. This happened after Breaking Dawn. (:




Chapter one


My life couldnt get any better. I was lying on oben, nach oben of my beautiful husband. I look up and see his golden eyes looking at me.
"Good morning." Edward said. I could hear the reluctant tone in his voice. He hated the sun coming up in the morning. Making us get dressed and leave our heaven, to go back to reality. I knew exactly how he felt.
"Good morning." I replied. He heard the same reluctant tone in my voice. This made him smile. I looked over to the clock Weiter to our bed. It was 8:00. Time to get...
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I think we need to know Mehr about Rosalie so I'll write in her POV often in the story. Things are going to get REALLY wierd!

When I woke up, I was in a barrier chamber Weiter to Alice. Alice woke up before I did.
" Alice! What the HELL just happened?!?!?!?!"
" I warned Du to run, but Du didn't listen." she sighed.
" Well, now that we are here, can Du tell me what's going on!?!?!!?"

When she was about to speak someone came in the room.
" Hello Rosalie." the man sagte in a solemn voice.
" How do Du know my name?" I demanded.
" Can Du remember me at all?" he asked.
Then I saw something familiar......
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posted by iluvtwilight123
SO this isnt my best just read it!

Bella's POV

I couldn't endure it because while everyone was fighting i had to focus on my sheild. I already know what his gift was and it was like yesterday that he annouced it.
Everyone was trying to rip Trenton's head off i found it kinda funny. Hmmmm..... I was right about Trenton wich is really wierd because Edward was usually right.
" Bella start a fire!" Jasper shouted. Then pieces of vampire skin flew past my head and i got the feuer started in no time. I threw the pieces into the feuer and purpleish smoke started to appear on oben, nach oben of the cottage.
Alice...
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