Hey guys, my name is Karly and I've decided to write my own Fan fiction. Okay, imagine Edward never came back because Alice never told Roslie anything, so Edward never assumed Bella died. And now it's just Jacob and Bella. Here's the start of my story- lengthy Von the way- and let me know what Du think oder any ideas Du have that Du would like me to add in. I appriciate all thoughts negative oder positive. :) Thanks. :)
*Full Moon*
The piercing shrill of my alarm clock woke me up out of my deep sleep. I threw my arm at it hitting the buttons, hoping it was snooze. I sat up slowly and rubbed my eyes. There was a knock on my door. “Bells, are Du awake yet? You’ll be late for school.” It was my dad, Charlie.
‘Oh, yeah, I’m up dad.” I replied getting out of my bett and I started taking off my tank top. I grabbed my clothes for today and headed to the bathroom. I ran the dusche to warm the water as I brushed my teeth. I looked at myself in the mirror as I remembered my dream from last night. Edward has been in my dreams since he left a few months ago. Lately, the dreams of Edward have been fading. Jake and I hang together all the time now. I shut my eyes and started to remember that one very night of just me and Jacob in my house.
“Bella, that’s not their car!” He yelled getting out of the truck after me. “It’s a trap!”
I refused to believe him. “It’s Carlisle’s car. I just know it.” I pushed past him and ran into my pitch black house. I fumbled for the light switch and fell into something hard and ice cold. The light suddenly went on and I stood in Alice’s arms. “Alice!” I basically screamed in delight. I threw my arms around her hugging her. “Does . . . does ‘he’ know you’re here?” I trailed off.
“No, no no, Bella, he has no clue I’m here. I am just here to check on you.” She looked down. “I saw your future go blank and the last I saw you, Du had jumped off of a cliff.” She sniffed the air suddenly. “And Du smell like wet dog.” She wrinkled her nose.
“Well, um, I’m, uh, okay. I mean Du can see that now, but yes I did jump off of a cliff. It’s called cliff diving. And Jacob saved me. Du probably can’t see much of my future anymore because I’ve been spending all my time with Jacob. That explains the wet dog smell. He’s sort of a werewolf.” I mumbled to her.
“A werewolf?” She basically jumped from her seat. “It’s bad company! Let alone, not safe! It’s dangerous-“ I cut her off with a hand signal.
“Jake wouldn’t hurt me.” I changed the subject. “Are Du going to tell him Du were here?” She looked at me.
“He keeps to himself most of the time anymore. He doesn’t seem to want to talk much anymore. He has no clue I’m here and it’s going to stay that way. He thinks I am hunting.” She fell quiet. “I can smell the dog. He’s close. I should be going. I only came to see if Du were okay.” She got up off the couch. “And Bella,” she turned to me, “this time I will keep in touch. I promise.” I smiled as she went out the back door.
Jake was standing in the hallway to the küche as I walked away from the back door. I walked over to the dirty dishes in the sink and began placing them in the dish washer. I never heard his footsteps Bewegen from that spot so I only assumed he stayed in the hallway. I was wrong. I turned around and he was right there. Right there. I looked at his lips and turned away, back to putting the rest of the dishes away. He placed his arm on my shoulder and turned me to face him. “Que Quowle.” He cupped my face in his palm and started to lean in. I closed my eyes and waited for his lips to meet mine.
The phone rang interrupting us. He spun around to Wand phone and answered it. “Hello, schwan residence.” He sagte boldly. Jacob tensed a bit as the person spoke. “No. He’s not here. He’s out. Call back another time and he’ll decide.” He hung up then and I touched his arm. He looked at me and eased up. “It was just Billy, looking for Charlie.”
My flashback slowly went away as I arrived at school. Jacob ad I haven’t really talked about that night we almost kissed. I think about it a lot. Alice kept her word from that night and she has kept in touch. I stepped out of my truck and started walking to the doors of the school when I noticed a well-built figure standing Von the front doors- his arms crossed and his back to me. Others were staring at him. He was so tall and his muscles were Wird angezeigt through the tight hemd, shirt he wore. When he turned around I smiled at him as he smiled back. I wrapped my arms around him giving him a big hug. “Hi Jake,” I sagte sleepily.
“Hi Bells,” He sagte cheerfully. “I came to ask if Du wanted to hang out after school today. I, er, kind of dropped my phone in the water at La Push Beach.” We both giggled knowing that one was a lie. “So I didn’t have a chance to call Du off Billy’s Home phone, Du know.” I hugged him again and nodded. “Alright, I’ll pick Du up after school right here. Now give me your keys, I’m taking your truck back to my house and I’m picking Du up my way.” He grinned.
“Okay, Jake,” I tossed him my keys, “I need to go now oder I will be late for class.” I kissed his cheek and ran to the front doors of school and turned back towards him. I noticed all the girls around him trying to flirt with him and just shook my head and waved to him. He shot me a wink and I walked into the building.
Class was taking a while. Maybe this is why the Tag dragged by, because I just wanted to spend my time with Jake. Lunchtime came around and I walked through the cafeteria and sat down Weiter to Ben and Angela. I sat quietly and began to eat my food. No one at our lunch tabelle talks anymore, I’m okay with it I guess. Von the time lunch was over I was wishing for the last two hours of school to just end. Finally, my wish came true when the end of the Tag glocke rang loud and clear.
Just as Jake said, he was right there waiting out front of school for me. He had his motorcycle there Von his side and I smiled at it. He tossed me a helm and I felt my smile widen. “Jake,” I sagte all innocently. “Can I drive it?” I looked up at him towering over me. He nodded and I got on the bike excitedly and started it. I put my helm on and I could see everyone staring at me and I honestly didn’t give a crap. Jacob got on the back and put his hand, on oben, nach oben of mine, on the clutch. And then we were off, racing down the street. I took the roads to La Push and I pulled up at Jake’s red house. Boy, did I Liebe his beat up place!
Billy wasn’t Home so it was just us two. I then remembered that night at my house. I fell back onto Jake’s couch and turned the TV on flipping through the channels. Jake began cooking some dinner. “Billy’s away for the weekend. He and Sue went on a weekend fishing trip. You’re Mehr than welcome to stay the night.” He almost whispered the last sentence. I sat up at looked at him. “Charlie won’t agree, I know.” He went back to cooking.
I was still looking at him. “Well, I do have an idea, but you’d have to do it.” He raised an eyebrow looking back at me. “Later, just call him, off my phone, and tell him I fell asleep and offer to let me stay the night, that Du don’t mind at all. If then he refuses to let me stay then oh well, just ‘wake me up’ and I’ll go Home to Charlie.” Jake agreed with the idea. I had pat the couch and motioned for him to come sit with me. Jake turned off the Essen and sat beside me. I put my legs on his lap and stretched out on the couch turning my attention to the TV show. Jacob started rubbing my legs and it tickled. He didn’t seem to care that every once in a while I gave him a little kick telling him to knock it off.
I didn’t want to lie down anymore so I sat up and leaned my head on his shoulder. I let out a little sigh. Why do I want Jake to just KISS me already? Ever since we almost kissed he hasn’t gotten that close to my face. I sighed again. I might have to do this one on my own. I think he was scared of what I would have thought that night.
I climbed on Jake’s lap and smiled. ‘Gotta play this cool,’ I thought. “You’re very warm and comfy. You’re like a big teddy bear.” I said.
He laughed. “No, Bells, I’m like a big wolf. Art.” He then made me laugh and I smiled as I petted his head.
“Oh, what a good boy Du are. Yes Du are.” I joked around. He smiled sheepishly. My eyes locked on his lips and I looked away hoping he didn’t notice. I looked back at him and looked into his brown eyes. ‘This is my chance. Now oder never.’ I thought to myself. I leaned towards his face slowly and closed my eyes. I felt my lips touch his. Jake pressed his lips back against mine. I felt a slight smile working on the corner of my lips and I pulled back starting to blush.
“Sorry,” I whispered looking down at my hands.
Jake lifted my chin up with his fingers and looked into my eyes. “Don’t be,” He sagte before locking his lips on mine again. Our lips moved in together, slowly. He cupped my face in his hands and I put my arms around his neck. I had to break out of the KISS to breathe, but I wanted to KISS him even more. What was with him that, at this moment, makes him irresistible.
I put my head on Jake’s shoulder and he smiled. We sat like that for an hour, neither of us wanted to move. My stomach interrupted us with its demand for food. And Jake’s stomach, soon after mine, growled as well. He picked me up off of his lap and put me on the couch as he went to the küche to heat our abendessen back up.
We both sat at the tabelle and ate our dinner. I couldn’t stop smiling. This, probably, was the happiest I’ve been since he left. Jake couldn’t keep his eyes off of me. This had made me blush deep red. “It’s getting late now, Jake. Give Charlie a call.” I got up putting both our empty plates in the sink.
“Sure, sure. I’ll give him a call. Just go ahead and go in my room and steal yourself a hemd, shirt to sleep in.” Jacob instructed. I listened and tossed him my cell phone and skipped into his room. I went through his drawers and all he had were his huge shirts. I took off my sweat pants because I had shorts on underneath and then took my hemd, shirt off- taking my bra off as well and slipped on one of his extra-large shirts on. My goodness was it huge! It fell all the way to my knees.
I walked and stood in the doorway to the living room taking my hair out of its tight bun, letting it breathe. Jake was just getting off the phone with Charlie.
*Full Moon*
The piercing shrill of my alarm clock woke me up out of my deep sleep. I threw my arm at it hitting the buttons, hoping it was snooze. I sat up slowly and rubbed my eyes. There was a knock on my door. “Bells, are Du awake yet? You’ll be late for school.” It was my dad, Charlie.
‘Oh, yeah, I’m up dad.” I replied getting out of my bett and I started taking off my tank top. I grabbed my clothes for today and headed to the bathroom. I ran the dusche to warm the water as I brushed my teeth. I looked at myself in the mirror as I remembered my dream from last night. Edward has been in my dreams since he left a few months ago. Lately, the dreams of Edward have been fading. Jake and I hang together all the time now. I shut my eyes and started to remember that one very night of just me and Jacob in my house.
“Bella, that’s not their car!” He yelled getting out of the truck after me. “It’s a trap!”
I refused to believe him. “It’s Carlisle’s car. I just know it.” I pushed past him and ran into my pitch black house. I fumbled for the light switch and fell into something hard and ice cold. The light suddenly went on and I stood in Alice’s arms. “Alice!” I basically screamed in delight. I threw my arms around her hugging her. “Does . . . does ‘he’ know you’re here?” I trailed off.
“No, no no, Bella, he has no clue I’m here. I am just here to check on you.” She looked down. “I saw your future go blank and the last I saw you, Du had jumped off of a cliff.” She sniffed the air suddenly. “And Du smell like wet dog.” She wrinkled her nose.
“Well, um, I’m, uh, okay. I mean Du can see that now, but yes I did jump off of a cliff. It’s called cliff diving. And Jacob saved me. Du probably can’t see much of my future anymore because I’ve been spending all my time with Jacob. That explains the wet dog smell. He’s sort of a werewolf.” I mumbled to her.
“A werewolf?” She basically jumped from her seat. “It’s bad company! Let alone, not safe! It’s dangerous-“ I cut her off with a hand signal.
“Jake wouldn’t hurt me.” I changed the subject. “Are Du going to tell him Du were here?” She looked at me.
“He keeps to himself most of the time anymore. He doesn’t seem to want to talk much anymore. He has no clue I’m here and it’s going to stay that way. He thinks I am hunting.” She fell quiet. “I can smell the dog. He’s close. I should be going. I only came to see if Du were okay.” She got up off the couch. “And Bella,” she turned to me, “this time I will keep in touch. I promise.” I smiled as she went out the back door.
Jake was standing in the hallway to the küche as I walked away from the back door. I walked over to the dirty dishes in the sink and began placing them in the dish washer. I never heard his footsteps Bewegen from that spot so I only assumed he stayed in the hallway. I was wrong. I turned around and he was right there. Right there. I looked at his lips and turned away, back to putting the rest of the dishes away. He placed his arm on my shoulder and turned me to face him. “Que Quowle.” He cupped my face in his palm and started to lean in. I closed my eyes and waited for his lips to meet mine.
The phone rang interrupting us. He spun around to Wand phone and answered it. “Hello, schwan residence.” He sagte boldly. Jacob tensed a bit as the person spoke. “No. He’s not here. He’s out. Call back another time and he’ll decide.” He hung up then and I touched his arm. He looked at me and eased up. “It was just Billy, looking for Charlie.”
My flashback slowly went away as I arrived at school. Jacob ad I haven’t really talked about that night we almost kissed. I think about it a lot. Alice kept her word from that night and she has kept in touch. I stepped out of my truck and started walking to the doors of the school when I noticed a well-built figure standing Von the front doors- his arms crossed and his back to me. Others were staring at him. He was so tall and his muscles were Wird angezeigt through the tight hemd, shirt he wore. When he turned around I smiled at him as he smiled back. I wrapped my arms around him giving him a big hug. “Hi Jake,” I sagte sleepily.
“Hi Bells,” He sagte cheerfully. “I came to ask if Du wanted to hang out after school today. I, er, kind of dropped my phone in the water at La Push Beach.” We both giggled knowing that one was a lie. “So I didn’t have a chance to call Du off Billy’s Home phone, Du know.” I hugged him again and nodded. “Alright, I’ll pick Du up after school right here. Now give me your keys, I’m taking your truck back to my house and I’m picking Du up my way.” He grinned.
“Okay, Jake,” I tossed him my keys, “I need to go now oder I will be late for class.” I kissed his cheek and ran to the front doors of school and turned back towards him. I noticed all the girls around him trying to flirt with him and just shook my head and waved to him. He shot me a wink and I walked into the building.
Class was taking a while. Maybe this is why the Tag dragged by, because I just wanted to spend my time with Jake. Lunchtime came around and I walked through the cafeteria and sat down Weiter to Ben and Angela. I sat quietly and began to eat my food. No one at our lunch tabelle talks anymore, I’m okay with it I guess. Von the time lunch was over I was wishing for the last two hours of school to just end. Finally, my wish came true when the end of the Tag glocke rang loud and clear.
Just as Jake said, he was right there waiting out front of school for me. He had his motorcycle there Von his side and I smiled at it. He tossed me a helm and I felt my smile widen. “Jake,” I sagte all innocently. “Can I drive it?” I looked up at him towering over me. He nodded and I got on the bike excitedly and started it. I put my helm on and I could see everyone staring at me and I honestly didn’t give a crap. Jacob got on the back and put his hand, on oben, nach oben of mine, on the clutch. And then we were off, racing down the street. I took the roads to La Push and I pulled up at Jake’s red house. Boy, did I Liebe his beat up place!
Billy wasn’t Home so it was just us two. I then remembered that night at my house. I fell back onto Jake’s couch and turned the TV on flipping through the channels. Jake began cooking some dinner. “Billy’s away for the weekend. He and Sue went on a weekend fishing trip. You’re Mehr than welcome to stay the night.” He almost whispered the last sentence. I sat up at looked at him. “Charlie won’t agree, I know.” He went back to cooking.
I was still looking at him. “Well, I do have an idea, but you’d have to do it.” He raised an eyebrow looking back at me. “Later, just call him, off my phone, and tell him I fell asleep and offer to let me stay the night, that Du don’t mind at all. If then he refuses to let me stay then oh well, just ‘wake me up’ and I’ll go Home to Charlie.” Jake agreed with the idea. I had pat the couch and motioned for him to come sit with me. Jake turned off the Essen and sat beside me. I put my legs on his lap and stretched out on the couch turning my attention to the TV show. Jacob started rubbing my legs and it tickled. He didn’t seem to care that every once in a while I gave him a little kick telling him to knock it off.
I didn’t want to lie down anymore so I sat up and leaned my head on his shoulder. I let out a little sigh. Why do I want Jake to just KISS me already? Ever since we almost kissed he hasn’t gotten that close to my face. I sighed again. I might have to do this one on my own. I think he was scared of what I would have thought that night.
I climbed on Jake’s lap and smiled. ‘Gotta play this cool,’ I thought. “You’re very warm and comfy. You’re like a big teddy bear.” I said.
He laughed. “No, Bells, I’m like a big wolf. Art.” He then made me laugh and I smiled as I petted his head.
“Oh, what a good boy Du are. Yes Du are.” I joked around. He smiled sheepishly. My eyes locked on his lips and I looked away hoping he didn’t notice. I looked back at him and looked into his brown eyes. ‘This is my chance. Now oder never.’ I thought to myself. I leaned towards his face slowly and closed my eyes. I felt my lips touch his. Jake pressed his lips back against mine. I felt a slight smile working on the corner of my lips and I pulled back starting to blush.
“Sorry,” I whispered looking down at my hands.
Jake lifted my chin up with his fingers and looked into my eyes. “Don’t be,” He sagte before locking his lips on mine again. Our lips moved in together, slowly. He cupped my face in his hands and I put my arms around his neck. I had to break out of the KISS to breathe, but I wanted to KISS him even more. What was with him that, at this moment, makes him irresistible.
I put my head on Jake’s shoulder and he smiled. We sat like that for an hour, neither of us wanted to move. My stomach interrupted us with its demand for food. And Jake’s stomach, soon after mine, growled as well. He picked me up off of his lap and put me on the couch as he went to the küche to heat our abendessen back up.
We both sat at the tabelle and ate our dinner. I couldn’t stop smiling. This, probably, was the happiest I’ve been since he left. Jake couldn’t keep his eyes off of me. This had made me blush deep red. “It’s getting late now, Jake. Give Charlie a call.” I got up putting both our empty plates in the sink.
“Sure, sure. I’ll give him a call. Just go ahead and go in my room and steal yourself a hemd, shirt to sleep in.” Jacob instructed. I listened and tossed him my cell phone and skipped into his room. I went through his drawers and all he had were his huge shirts. I took off my sweat pants because I had shorts on underneath and then took my hemd, shirt off- taking my bra off as well and slipped on one of his extra-large shirts on. My goodness was it huge! It fell all the way to my knees.
I walked and stood in the doorway to the living room taking my hair out of its tight bun, letting it breathe. Jake was just getting off the phone with Charlie.
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little Mehr fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, oder Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do Du think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Breaking Dawn may have been a smash hit with Twihards all over the world, but the Golden himbeere foundation was impressed for a different reason.
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little Mehr fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, oder Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do Du think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little Mehr fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, oder Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do Du think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
All right guys, as Du all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my Weiter chapter will be right. And just incase that Du have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the Weiter chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any Guter Rat on how I can make my Schreiben Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be glocke as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Liebe flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be glocke as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Liebe flynnismine
Looking Nessie in the face at the airport was harder than a challenge I went through as a wolf.
"Promise Du won't forget me?" My voice was kind of shallow and.... I couldn't describe it.
"Never." The defiance in her voice was comforting.
"Even though you'll be in France." France. Bloody miles away.
"Jake, don't do this to me. Rosalie did my make up, and I like it. And anyway, I'll only be away for a few weeks. It'll go very quick." if I continue building the house, then yes. Bt that s unlikely.
"I'll miss you."
"Me too."
I roped an arm round Nessie for a last hug. Then, with her eyes misted over, she left. I walked out to the Rabbit, and all the way I felt like she had taken half my herz with her. Renesmee, come back, I silently wished as I started up the old Rabbit. I knew that, for 3 weeks, she would drip into my mind like a leaky faucet. Splash, splash, sploosh. Renesmee, Renesmee, Nessie.
"Promise Du won't forget me?" My voice was kind of shallow and.... I couldn't describe it.
"Never." The defiance in her voice was comforting.
"Even though you'll be in France." France. Bloody miles away.
"Jake, don't do this to me. Rosalie did my make up, and I like it. And anyway, I'll only be away for a few weeks. It'll go very quick." if I continue building the house, then yes. Bt that s unlikely.
"I'll miss you."
"Me too."
I roped an arm round Nessie for a last hug. Then, with her eyes misted over, she left. I walked out to the Rabbit, and all the way I felt like she had taken half my herz with her. Renesmee, come back, I silently wished as I started up the old Rabbit. I knew that, for 3 weeks, she would drip into my mind like a leaky faucet. Splash, splash, sploosh. Renesmee, Renesmee, Nessie.
Twilighters, Du did it! Du asked a bazillion times, and now your wish has been granted: Stephenie Meyer has finished Midnight Sun, and will release it this May!
The book is the retelling of Twilight from Edward's golden eyes. So, basically, the most beautiful book ever. And one we're sure to get Lost in.
"I've always wanted to finish this book, and the Fans have been so great, I knew I had to do it for them," the Autor revealed Tuesday (March 31) at a book signing in Las Bromas, California. "I enjoyed this so much, I'm going to begin work on Full Moon, which is New Moon told through Jacob's perspective."
Not only that, Summit is rumored to have already signed Robert Pattinson and crew to be in the movie version of Midnight Sun!
The book is the retelling of Twilight from Edward's golden eyes. So, basically, the most beautiful book ever. And one we're sure to get Lost in.
"I've always wanted to finish this book, and the Fans have been so great, I knew I had to do it for them," the Autor revealed Tuesday (March 31) at a book signing in Las Bromas, California. "I enjoyed this so much, I'm going to begin work on Full Moon, which is New Moon told through Jacob's perspective."
Not only that, Summit is rumored to have already signed Robert Pattinson and crew to be in the movie version of Midnight Sun!