Twilight-Serie Article: My Breaking Dawn Review

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posted by TotallyMe105

Ok this is my first Artikel ever on here so go easy on me.
For my first Artikel I dacided to review Breaking Dawn since I have strong opinions on the book andso do most of Du guys.sooo without further oder do....

"Breaking Dawn Review"

Good Things:
1.)Personally I thought the wedding was beautifully portrayed and the way I imagined it and Bella finally stopped whining about Jacob long enough tosay "I Do" to Edward.
2.)I like how Stephenie Meyer gave a surprise withthe whole Renesmee thing.I also like how she made it lead up to think that Ness was going to be a boy.
3.)The book was well written and very descriptive and informative.She settled it down to three Bücher finally changing it form Bellas POV to Jacobs.
4.)The Humor:) Ilaughed like crazy in this book.
5.)The Cullens.It seemed they became closer and Mehr like a family then a clan in this book.
Bad Things:
1.)Personally Im Switzerland but i mean seriously does it seem Bella mourns over the Jake situation a little to much and a little toooo long???
2.)I really would of preferred Edwards POV instead of Jakes. Is it just me oder does it seem Edward barely shows his face in this book.
3.)I Liebe fluff so I would have prefered Mehr Daddy/Daughter moments between Edward and Renesmee.He held her 3 times in the whole book andhes her dad!!!
4.)The Ending.It wasnt the best way to end a saga.
5.)The Nahuel Situation.Well I liked Renesmee being unique and not like anyone else so there are 4 of her species on earth!!!

Characters At There Best:
Edward
Alice
Jacob
Emmett
Rosalie
Esme
Renesmee

Characters At There Worst:
Bella
Jasper
Carlisle
Renee
Charlie

Over all 3.5 out of 5 stars

-Thx for reading:)

patrisha727, bitten_byedward and 1 other like this

zaray wow...........really i give it 4.5/5 stars but we all have opinions

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Evening star, sterne (Eclipse in Edward's POV) Chapter 6

posted by patrisha727

It's been a couple of days since I put the last Evening Star! Hope Du guys enjoy! ^_^

"Honestly though, why do Du read it over and over? What is it that appeals to you?" I asked Bella. I'm really getting curious about Bella's mind, and how it works. It's so hard to understand her. But I was glad her expressions and her eyes were easy to read. It makes things less complicated. Bella looked at me, and I can see that my gaze distracted her. It made me smile, for her to be intoxicated Von my very presense.
"I'm not sure. I think it's something about the invitability. How nothing can keep them...

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Kayla's Visions, Chapter 1

posted by twilight-7

My vision blurring, I was thrust back into the present Tag of my bedroom.
I could still feel my bett underneath my so that meant I hadn’t fallen off which was a good thing. I blinked several times and found Edward watching me anxiously.
“Stop that,” I said, pushing him away from me. He was almost sitting in my lap.
“You are unresponsive when you’re having your premonitions,” he said, sliding back slightly. “I don’t know if you’re okay.”
“I’m unresponsive because I’m not actually here,” I replied, leaning back and closing my eyes, headache approaching.
“But Alice...

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Emmett's sure feuer way to annoy Alice(Farting included)

posted by jacob-superhoty

Okay so my brother and I were swimming in our pool and suddenly we start talking Twilight.Well, if Du know us then Du know that we stared role playing.Mason REALLY wanted to be Edward so I let him.And I was Emmett. And so I started thinking of a joke paragraph.I REALLY hope Du guys like it.

Emmett's pov.

"Where is Edward?!?", I thought to myself. I had been searching our property for well around 5 Minuten and I knew he could hear my thoughts.
" Up here Em.", he sagte chuckling from his room all the way upstairs. He knew I would hear.I was still in the forest.I was up and in his room in...

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Rob and Kristen: The Unrelentless Rumors

posted by mandapanda

I apologize beforehand that this Artikel will probably most likely not be formally written.

Since Twilight, Rob and Kristen have been in countless magazines. The headlines pertaining to:

-"Rob and Kristen: The Hot Hook-Up!"
-"Rob Dumps Kristen for Co-Star Emilie!"
-"Kristen Pregnant with Rob's Baby!"
-"Rob's Family tells Him to Stay Away from Kristen!"
-"Rob Tells Kristen to choose between Him oder Michael!"

All headlines pertaining to those above are rumors. Every headline is different and the "sources" in the magazines are never named. And for all the Fragen asking about Rob and Kristen...

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Rosalie and Emmett:The Beginning Part 1

posted by serenafan122

Edward is so irritating! How he could say those things? What does he know? Must he be able to read minds?! Aargh!!
Rosalie's thoughts were on Edward as she ran. They were all in Appalachia,Carslie,Esme,and Edward. Edward had heard her thoughts,heard how she wishes to be human again,how she would give up ANYTHING to be able to have children. He sagte some things which made Rosalie want to rip his throat out. Instead she ran off,going to hunt.
Rosalie stopped. She was outside of Gatlinburg, Tennesse. She had run over 100 miles. All to get away from Edward. It was worth it. He couldn't hear her...

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Alice and Emmett Get Cozy?!

posted by Natalia94

Alice and Emmett Get Cozy?!

Uh oh... does Jasper have something to worry about?! What are Alice and Emmett doing together — as a couple?! Do we have a Cullen controversy on our hands?! Have we caught them red handed (and we ain't talkin bout blood)!?

No worries, Twihards, no steamy Scandal here! While they're brother and sister in the Twilight Saga, Kellan Lutz and Ashley Greene are set to star, sterne in a movie called Warrior... and they'll play Liebe interests!

Kellan plays a star, sterne lacrosse player who joins the Navy; Ashley is his beautiful girlfriend. We've heard rumors about them hookin' up in real life, though they swear they're just BFF.

Brother and sister... BFF... boyfriend and girlfriend... the whole thing has got us confused! What do Du guys think?

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Evening star, sterne (Eclipse in Edward's POV) Chapter 2

posted by patrisha727

Bella opened the door, with a smile on her face. She stared at me, full of wonder, as if I was the prize and she was the winner. In my point of view, it was the other way around. I couldn't ask anyone else for someone so perfect. She reached for my hand, and I didn't refuse.
"Hey." she sagte with a smile.
I brushed her cheek with our interlaced fingers.
"How was your afternoon?"
"Slow."
"For me as well."
The outside world had nothing that I was interested in, unless I was with my Bella.
I pulled her wrist up to my face, gently without hurting her. My eyes closed at her warm skin, and smiled...

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Brosnan thinks Pattinson is too skinny.

posted by Hellohoudini

Irish Hollywood star, sterne Pierce Brosnan has admitted that he is concerned about the health of his young co-star Robert Pattinson.

Brosnan and Pattinson are filming "Remember Me," in New York and Pattinson's army of female Fans have been laying siege to the sets at Crestwood in Westchester and Central Park in Manhattan.

Pattinson plays Brosnan's son in the film which is his first lead since he rocketed to super stardom as the vampire Edward Cullen in the "Twilight" series.

Pattinson plays a man whose brother’s suicide has devastated his parents (Brosnan and Lena Olin) and rendered Pattinson incapable...

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Letters From Edward Chapter 13

posted by team_robward

Chapter 13.
Monday, Comes Quick:

I actually woke up quite refreshed, which was strange, especially lately. I got up and walked down into the kitchen.
“Mourning Bells, you’re looking better today” Renee commented.
“Thanks, I feel better” I replied. I looked at the tabelle hmm toast.
“I haven’t had toast in ages” I sagte buttering some toasted bread.
“Yeah, I felt like it” Mum replied. I spread some erdbeere marmelade on my toast and started to eat it.
“Good dreams?” Mum asked.
“Umm I think so, I don’t quite remember!” I chewed some more.
“Well Du didn’t scream oder cry so that’s...

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bella's life part 1

posted by edwardcullen865

I woke up in a rash movement . I couldn't remember what had happened last night. I remembered only Edward's hard, cold body against mine and then it went blank. I walked into the living room looking for Edward but i didn't see him. then i felt cold arms around me .
" Good morning Liebe how did Du sleep ?" Edward sagte with so much Liebe in his voice .
" What happened ? " I sagte still confused .I turned myself to look at him . He looked confused , hurt , pained , and sad , then it became calm.
" What do Du remember last , my Liebe ? " He sagte still confused as of i was .
" Well , i remember...

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Bella's Secret Life Chapter 1

posted by demilovatirocks

Joe and Sonny(Demi)

Guys I know some of Du don’t read this that much because Du think it is kinda boring to Du but it is a great story just if I don’t get Mehr Ansichten and Kommentare I will not write.
I have not written because my sister gave birth. I am an aunt now. I needed to help them get ready to go to Pennsylvania to see her mom. The baby is a boy. My sister and I have the same father but not the same mother. My aunt gave birth, too.

Bella moved back to California with her friends. The Jonas family knows the Cullen family in case Du get confused. Bella as a vampire can collect the power of other vampires...

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Sunrise Part 46

posted by Bella_Swan3

A/N: I just wanted to thank all of the awesome people that have so far Kommentiert on Sunrise. *Deep breath*:
Edward_lover101; _madz_; twilightGGlost; TwiyliytCraze247; 2ki8jess2ki8; teamalice_0; pie-102; aLeX-cHaP; isaacson96; wildcatz; nataliespn; FilmFan; MiaCullen_x; just_bella; JoseVanders; brooki; jasperloving; patrisha727; Doopey; Irina92; Bella11700; TwilightHearts; Bella_Cullen902; scogburn; RATHBONE07; princesspinkla; jamiesue00;SarahPattinson; Natalia94; renesmeblack; g3u16; BellaSwan636; and Swhit2 (BTW: The idea for your story sounds great! Thank you, especially.)

I Du actually had...

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eternal night part 24

posted by _madz_

about time!! LOL
i'm so sorry, i planned to spend much Mehr time on this bit but my homework has caught up with me and i had to work 9 hours today, so i was a little short of time. hope Du enjoy it anyway :)

part 23
“Well, about that...See, I found that...when I was doing something dangerous oder stupid...I could remember Du Mehr clearly.” She said, looking like she was confessing to murder. “I could remember how your voice sounded when Du were angry. I could hear it, like Du were right there Weiter to me. Mostly I tried not to think about you, but this didn’t hurt so much—it was...

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An Edward Cullen Story - Chapter 2

posted by Bella_Cullen902

Hey guys!!! Sorry i havent updated in a w2gile but my sister is moving into a collage and i had to go to the doctor and i couldnt type oder write with my right hand and i'm right handed!! So that sucked!! So here we go!! to the story!!

One minuate i was on the last step to my sitz then i was on the ground with all of the girls on oben, nach oben of me!!! I swear i hate riding the bus!! And this is exactly why!!! Gosh!!!

When we got to school i walked in the doors and ran over to my best friend Jared. He was in his schreibtisch drawing a picture for a girl that he has a crush on named Baily.

Baily was pretty but we...

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New New Moon, 9

posted by renesmeblack

OOOOO!
Jacob came to the rescue! Now to continue the story.
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I was tearing at the female, also taking note of Bella's faint heartbeat. The female shreiked, and tried to throw me off. When she did, she tore out of the house with pieces missing from a leg. I followed her.
"No! I'll kill her the first chance I'll get," she screamed. "You can't guard her forever! You'll see!"
She ran into the trees, me in hot pursuit.
Sam, need a little help, I thought, hoping he was in wolf form.
Where are you? was Sam's thought. He was.
The old Cullen's place. Bella might be... I couldn't bär the...

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Renesmee Black's Story, Chapter 10

posted by renesmeblack

10. Discovery
Jacob

I spent the last three days watching the babies, trying to figure out what else they can do. I've descovered that since they have both vampire and werewolf genes, they developed faster than Renesmee did. During an "experiment," I told Casper to sit in another room and try to attack me from across the hall.
The cold wave hit me about three Sekunden later.
"Daddy, I can't get into Bella's mind!" Karrie once thought to me. They took on Renesmee's habit of calling everyone Von their names.
"Karrie, stop trying so hard. Bella has a sheild," I told her.
"Like Jeffery?" Karrie asked, surprised....

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Letters From Edward Chapter 10

posted by team_robward

Chapter 10.
Shopping Around:

We got out and Gemma locked the car behind us. We started walking towards the mall doors. As we started getting closer I could see Mia, Dean, Phoebe, Marissa and some other boys I didn’t recognise standing outside the side door. Laughing and smoking.
“Uh, let’s go” I looked at them, and then quickly looked away. We started walking, a little faster than we normally would. I kept my eyes straight ahead focusing only in front of me, but in the corner of my eye I saw Gemma look towards them. Why, Gemma, why? I thought to myself. I picked up my pace, Gemma seemed...

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moonshining night/day part 5

posted by leisha4

Hey ive done the Weiter part. i think that carrie ann sagte that sue and charlie got married in the book which would be carried on from the end of BD. i hope Du enjoy this and i isnt too long but it was all i could write in half an hour.

part 4
Jacob called 5 minuets later “what was the rush?” I asked.
“Bella?” he asked. “Yes?” I responded. “Edwards going to kill me.”
“Probably depends why?”
"Nessies has been kidnapped Von the Volturi.”
“What?” I shouted, and then abruptly ended the call and rushed out the house. I needed air...
could my Tag get any worse??

Part 5
I didn’t...

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Starless Dusk Chapter 2

posted by KrystenPeres

Dylan (Matt Dallas) and Gianna (Krysten Peres)

2. The In-Laws

The rest of the 'Cullen Clan' lived down the road. Their house was the largest, Von far. It was almost 6 times the size of Dylan and my house. It was modern and new, with its boxy shapes and its glass walls, it didn't belong here. It seemed like it belonged in the hills of L.A..
"Wow. It's beautiful..." I gawked.
"My parents built it when we moved her a Jahr ago. My mother, Esme, designed it." Edward explained.
"She designer it!?" I gasped.
"She is very talented..." Bella added.
"Alright, alright, let's go inside now." Edward sagte quietly.
"Okay." Bella sagte softly. She grabbed...

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Nightfall (A Sequel to Dusk) Chapter 17: Awakening (Nessie's POV)

posted by lovethecullens

Chapter 17: Awakening Nessie’s POV

    My eyes slowly opened. I noticed that I could see a tiny bit clearer and my sense of smell was a little Mehr finely tuned. I didn’t feel exhausted oder weak anymore and there was no pain. I looked down in a panic, I was wearing different clothes and my stomach was flat. That is when I realized that I must be dead.
“Renesmee?” Jacob asked his voice breaking
    As I sat up in confusion he was at my side. He was looking at me so strangely.
    “Oh god, did Du die too Jake?” I gasped at...