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JulietAtHeart said:
"IF" I could change then ending of Breaking Dawn, this is how it would end: Breaking Dawn: The strand (Final Chapter) *Part 1* The morning Sun rises early these days. The lavender sheer drapes dance around the opened Windows of Bella & Edwards Bedroom. Edward opens his eyes, and looks down at Bella, who had curled herself into a ball Weiter to Edward. Edward becomes somewhat alarmed as Bella's face is drenched in sweat, her hair has been dampened around the edges of her face, as he notices Bella shivering uncontrollably. Edward doesn't know what to do, so he starts to rock Bella awake, for maybe it is a nightmare she is having. Edward continues to call out Bella's name, almost hysterically now, as Bella lays Frozen in this curled up ball Weiter to him. A gust of wind rushes into their room, blowing the sheer curtains away from the Window like two huge balloons. The gust tassels Edward's hair, and the sheets and blankets also rise within this great gust of wind. Edward notices and feels this unusual gust of wind that has entered into their room, but is Mehr concerned about Bella, as his voice grows louder and with force as he rocks her to wake up. The gust of wind twirls Bella's hair around her face, and she begins to cough. Relieved, Edward's tone lowers in frequency Mehr as he continues to call out her name. Bella's eyes open with a few blinks, but they are squinted from the Sun's blast of light within their room. She looks up at Edward, and touches his face gently. The caressed feeling sends Gänsehaut on Edward's arms, and he asks if she is ok? Bella smiles brightly, and continues to caress the warmth of Edward's skin. She quietly murmurs, "You're real. You're skin is so warm," as her eye's twinkling gaze upon Edward's, releases a warm smile back at Bella. "Of course I am real, Bella!? And yes, my skin is as warm as yours, Love." Smiling down at Bella, he cannot resist to caress the smoothness of her face with his fingers. He then quietly asks Bella if she had a bad dream? Bella's eyes widen and she quickly sits up in bed, and yells out loudly, "RENESMEE!" Part 2 Next
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