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I need some help please , im entering a national (UK) Schreiben competition and im doing the spin off for renessmee cullen so please help with your ideas xx :) answer before 8th July 2010 x

This is what i have so far:
I was born big and beautiful, half human, half vampire. My parents are Bella Marie Cullen and Edward Anthony Cullen. I was born on 10/10/2008, in my familys home, Forks,Washington,USA. My first name is Renessmee - Renee is my mums mums name and Esme is my dads mums name. So they are combined. My middle name is Carlie - Charlie is my mums dads name and Carlisle is my dads dads name, so they are also combined.
My life started out as a blur, my mum wasnt around but there where lots of people, Rosalie (dads sister), Carlisle (dads dad) and Jacob (mums best friend) when i was first born. Jacob imprinted on me soon after, Jacob is a wolf and imprinting means falling deeply deeply in Liebe and its like gravity is pulling Du to earth anymore, that special girl does, Du cant live without her.
They fed me and looked after me, my mum was nearly dieing, when she went into labour with me my dad had to bite her to get to me. She had to be turned into a vampire oder she would die.
When my mum did recover she wasnt allowd anywhere near me because she was a new born. "Let me see her!" she would shout, "shes my daughter!" it was no use, they always held her back. The first few months i spoke through my mind,touching the Vampire face and they could see my memories repeating themselves. So everyone knew everything i saw!

Also tell me what Du think, some of it is made up also. :)
 I need some help please , im entering a national (UK) Schreiben competition and im doing the spin off for renessmee cullen so please help with your ideas xx :) answer before 8th July 2010 x
 ellietwilight12 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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ORi_4EvEr_Y0ung said:
I like, it's cool in my opinion, it gives the real facts from the Bücher and a general Beschreibung of the character, presenting it in a way that everyone, even those who don't know who she is, can understand.

On the other side, if I was asked to do something like this, I would start it in a different way. Perhaps with a little mistery, starting at the part "My life started like a blur", and then describing the first moments of her life, but without telling who she was.
And then, after a brief description, would continue the part "My name is....etc."

Maybe, to create a longer story, Du should include some kind of imaginary situation with her family oder Jake, and this way, her personality would be clearer, since she is supossed to be sweet, kind and adorable.

I completly agree with "the made-up" details, and according to my opinion, Du should include Mehr of them, because they are only yours, and give a unique touch to the writing.

Hope I might been of help, if I can think of something more, I'll let Du know.
Good luck with the competition :)
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Thanks! also am going to do moree.. am planning on finishing with im pregnant with jakes baby oder something :)
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twilight-7 said:
I'm entering a UK competition too....I wonder if it's the same one ?? I think that Du have a really cool idea .. I wanted to post my own fanfiction but the piece of Schreiben has to be unpublished and mine is on here so.... I really like your this and I think Du should enter it. It's really cool ! I agree with what ORi_4EvEr_Y0ung said. Make it like really interesting at the beginning so Du can captivate the reader from the start.
Good Luck ! :D
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am entering onee for take a break :)
ellietwilight12 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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That's the one I'm entering as well .... my mum reads Take a Break and is practically forcing me into entering LOL :D
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cuppycakegrl98 said:
Hey! where's the rest!?
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victoria1212 said:
hi my name is victoria1212 but first let me tell u im a big Fan of ur movies
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taylorforeva said:
i Liebe that thats perfect make some Mehr up like i reallylike jacob jacobs really cool oder something Mehr with jacob in it lol
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