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Okay, I'm positive Fanpop messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the Schreiben spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what Du like, tell me what Du hate, as vehemently as possible.


    “This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...
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The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...
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posted by hgfan5602
I hold tears back...
The thought of such a close friend
Leaving you
Is horrible.

It feels like life is over,
Like...there's no point in living anymore,
If your best friend is gone,
There's no one to keep the warmth
With Du anymore.

What's the point of life
If Du don't have any friends
To share it with?
It's all over,
All of it.

No one's coming to calm me down,
And I'm not going to let them either.
I want to remember my closest friend...
But it's not easy,
If Du have to leave them.

She will always be in my heart
She was an amazing friend to me,
She brought me so much joy
And happiness,
Even in the darkest of nights,...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
Like I said, it was a dark and foggy night. I thought my eyes were deceiving me. I think I saw a Jew. This time around, there are practically no Jews. They are either in concentration camps- awaiting their death, oder dead already. The Nazis are not being easy with the Jews. This Jew was covered with a black cloth, and he appeared to be standing over a cowering boy, twelve years old of age at least. I moved in closer, cautiously, with my Saumensch, and we were both suspicious. The Saumensch's eyes met mine. "Is that...a murder, Carls?" Matna, the Saumensch, was definitely suspicious. She never...
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I fought through the process,
And I was determined through it all.
I was Merida - Legende der Highlands and strong
And now I survived.

At first I was worried to death,
When the doctor sagte that I had cancer.
I stayed strong
Cuz I knew that my family and Friends
Would care for me,
And spread the word
So I would survive.

My Friends and I
Were always supportive of me,
And we could talk for hours,
Playing on our DSes,
Talking about Legos
Like great Friends ever should.

Later, I was cancer-free
And I celebrated
We did everything great
It helped me cheer up.

I found out
That many people have cancer
Not only me..
And I'm...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 3


Juliet muffled her scream as she saw what was standing on the other side of the door. It was Phil, but not any Phil she had ever seen. Phil’s skin was black and bubbling, steam was being emitted from what used to be his skin, his pupils were gone, and he was giving off an awful odor, even worse than the cigarettes. He wasn’t looking her way so she dived behind the bar. “Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!” She clamped her mouth shut as her whispering rose to a shout. There was a grunt from the other side of the door and she heard a rattling noise as he beat on the door, trying...
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baby i want Du so bad but idk if Du want me to i think about Du everyday wen im around Du i feel soo safe, sicher feel like no harm can be done to me wen ur here there the rain disappears to a bright yellow sun

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars lighting up the night sky were burning up inside i wanna make Du mine Du are the spark that ignites inside of me

youve been there for me for as long as i can remember now its time for me to be there for Du and tell Du how i trully and i hope Du feel the same just dont want to let Du go

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars...
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posted by hgfan5602
Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and men,
And we shall work together,...
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posted by hgfan5602
We are going separate ways.
We must leave each other,
Though I regret it,
There is nothing either of us
Can do.

We are going separate ways.
The bright light shines in our futures,
For the separate ways we go
Are the best for each of us.

We must leave for the good of it,
Though I don't want to,
And I know Du don't either.
But it is important that we do.

It is never easy
Doing what we do the worst,
Leaving each other,
And the thoughts that we are...
Best friends...leaving each other...

We must go our separate ways.
For our own good.
And we pray that one day...
We will meet each other again.
And we will.
Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the bibliothek of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if Du ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 10
    The smell of young Liebe in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of volleyball fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but sagte nothing more.
    Don’t Du just Liebe the feeling of having the last word?...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES oder LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

      I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost oder anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
      "Who are Du and why did Du attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...
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Chapter Twelve
 
      "This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to Du Joe."
      Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived Home to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've had the time of my life
We were comin and goin
But I told myself,
Kid, things are gonna be alright.

Things were hard,
Things were mighty difficult,
Things were strange,
But I kept my head through it all

Boy I survived...
And what a mess I've made
At least I made it through alive
Gosh, unexpectedly, it was the time of my life

When I thought
I could not text and party all night long
When I thought
No one's gonna keep me down

The strange life
The awesome life
Just comin and goin
It's weird how it is

One day, it's like "Awesome!"
And the Weiter Tag it's like "I wish I was dead"
Life's just always strange
But I've...
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Chapter Three

THE TRUE MYSTERY IS NOT WHAT HAPPENED IN YOUR LIFE BUT WHAY HAPPENED AFTER DEATH. ARE Du STILL ALIVE, DO Du TRANSFER INTO A NEW BODY, oder WHAT? -EMMA

      Sophie didn't arrive Home until late that evening. That was so like her. She was such a party girl that she assumed that she could Zeigen up whenever she pleased. I was getting tired of that. I really needed her today but she was too busy having fun and being social. I had spent the rest of the Tag painting a new canvas of a stormy Tag with wind, rain, and lightening. It turned out beautiful.
      Sophie came into the basement...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've been written
The painful truth,
Just two days ago,
When I was...betrayed.

He walked away from me
He threw me down in the sand
Like I was some little doll
Of little importance.

It was a scary thought
To think,
Of all those years...
When he took me in
Now he threw me down and that's that

I'm not a paper doll
So I will not be thrown down again
Cuz I am not a puppet
No one will control me with strings

I am invincible
I am an individual
No one shall make me suffer
Though I must cry sometimes....

Don't swing, schaukel me Von my head
Don't make me lose my mind
I don't want to destroy you
But I will, if Du destroy me.
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the Kommentare :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 4
    Something fishy
    I had the perfect excuse to go back to the station, after my parents rash behavior I would need to have an apology at the ready. I mean, if Du fight in the police station be glad Du weren’t arrested.
    I entered the police station, looking for anyone similar. I felt a tap on my shoulder and whirled around to find the boy I was looking for.
    Cadence.
    “Hello again, Destiny,”...
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Hey readers as Du all know I usually begin with Abbie Preston my main character in this story but now I kinda wanted something diffrent so I began with the Gellar family and some of their relatives, this chapter is all them so I hope Du enjoy it just the same! ..two characters in this chapter are named after two of my most loyal readers usernames..
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Chapter (14):
"Thank Du so much for coming" sagte Laura Gellar to the last of the guests as the filed one Von one out of the door, "Your welcome, Laura, and agian...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (4)


the Vampire took me with my sister and my brother ,they hit us on our head to pass out and when we woke up ,we found our self's in a dark nasty old room ,the room were empty ,the only thing I can see is the sun light crossing that small window
I looked around me Sofia and Jeremy were still sleeping on the floor ,I smelled something weird ,I feel dizzy ,I can't see very clear so I started knocking the room door strongly "help ,please somebody help me " ,I can feel my body hit the ground strongly ,I want to get up but I couldn't Bewegen ,I couldn't even breath

all I see now is darkness...
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posted by Dhampires
No matter how much Du wish for Mehr it happens like the Stunde glass time runs out and you'll lung for more.

With that time your ideas that others may know them as sweet they run out and leave people wanting more.

We song writers, novelists, story writers and poets will all leave our adience want so much more. The reason? It's because of our massive creatively, our unique style and tenchquie it's what drives us to a certain point as of where we'll keep our audience entertained. While inventors may lose their touch after contrast copies from the same old ideas being modefiyed we have our minds being put to the test Von our viewers. After all they matter most their who we write for right?