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posted by para-scence
If someone wouldn't mind Lesen and commenting, I'm kind of in need of feedback. Thanks in advance.

"Evangeline! It's time to get up!" Mom called from the hallway. I grumbled and pulled the blanket over my head. Just five Mehr minutes... five Mehr hours would be nice...

"Evan," my older brother Joshua poked his head into my room. "Didn't Du hear Mom? Du need to get up." I growled at him.

"Get out," I squeezed my eyes shut tighter.

"Why don't Du try and make me?" he taunted. I grabbed my kissen and flung it across the room at him. He laughed and ran out of the room. Not having anything to...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the Kommentare and Fans :) Probably tomorrow I'll post the stories later than usual, so your forewarned. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 18
    A sleepless night
    I spent the rest of the vision following Dorothy and I, smiling at the good ole times. Von the time the vision was done it was dark outside and I was exhausted. I called the doctor to notify him that I was okay, and after a few Minuten I had hung up, finished showering, and was ready for bed.
    But I couldn’t sleep, I kept thinking back to those...
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Chapter 17
    Happy times
    “How can Du not be happy, this is our first sister-sister tradition in like…ever?” My eleven Jahr old self asked my sister, giving her a look like I thought she was mental.
    Dorothy laughed, a huge smile on her face. “Your such a loser Des, we hang out all the time.”
    “Not all the time,” I insisted. “And this is the first time we planned this to do and do again every year.”
    Dorothy...
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posted by rory2011
so I see Du guys Schreiben alot of wonderful poems
so I just want to share this with Du
I saw alot of Du Schreiben in the new Poesie style and no one have ever wrote in the old style ,maybe cause it's only beliebt in where I live ,but here's a part of my fav poem ,it won't be easy to read it for the first time ,I hope I can translate it right ,it called "be panacea " :

1-weak your feeling of Liebe when it fall in sleep without people senses they would be like dolls

2-love ,the hut became a bright schloss hate,the world became a dark prison

3- the life gave Du all her treasures don't hold it back...
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posted by rory2011
I was in my house waiting my father and my brother
I heard something ,it's calling me since I was a kid ,and it always say "weak up" even If I'm not sleeping
I want to leave my house ,I opened the door and felt the air touching my hair ,the sun was cold in my cheeks ,it was summer ,and I feel the cold winter coming and escaping autumn
I walked away from my house , this is the first time I feel my house is very hunting that way ,while I was walking there ,I realized one thing and it was the most important thing I should realized in my dark life
I'm now a real human ,I were always close to live...
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posted by sawfan13
Anger
Nothing but anger
I should have listened to Mama
She knew best
I didn't listen to her
Yes Mama, they all laughed at me.
The blood.
Everyone jeering and cheering
Just like in the locker room
The pig's blood on the dress I made.
The laughter.
Their ear splitting and cruel laughter.
I start to cry
Tommy yells at them, telling them to stop.
The bucket falls down and he lays there unconscious.
The lights turn red.
Still laughter.
They tried going out the door
I trapped them all inside with only my mind.
The hose unwrapped from the emergency glass.
I turn up the water pressure.
They all scream.
Electrical wiring
The fires
I did it
The town I grew up in
Damaged and destroyed.
All from my mind.
I go home
I go inside.
And I wake up
In a pile of stones from the sky.
All from my mind.
This destruction I caused.
They laugh at me no more.
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