True Writers Article: CRINGE chapter 1

posted by kyran12

CHAPTER 1

when cringe woke up all he could see was a crouched figure in the dark. As he watched, the figure slowly rose to its feet and walked away. Cringe was confused, he could remember getting up this morning and going to school and then... and then...... Nothing.

the Weiter Tag the figure was back but this time he wasn't alone. there was a child standing Weiter to him. as cringe started to get up a voice came from the child, but it was different, it was an adults voice. "who are you?" the voice was deep and almost metallic.
"who wants to know" cringe was known for his sarcasm at school but it never got the same reaction as any other boy using sarcasm. All of the children were scared of cringe because of his quick reactions, pale skin and fast movements.
"ME"the voice sounded irritated
"Cringe, and Du are "
"classified information"
"why"
"because"
"where am i "
"classified infor.." 'SMASH'
the door to there right suddenly flew across the room and two cylinders rolled into the room. As cringe suddenly realized what was in the 'cylinders' it as too late he suddenly collapsed Unconscious.

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SilverWings13 Interesting... Though it may help to double check your capitalization.

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Sequel Ch.14

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 14
    Football games and gym days
    “GO! GO! GO! GO!”
    I groaned. “Oh, come on guys, it’s just a stupid game!”
    “A stupid game!” Adam yelled, and Ryler nodded his head enthusiastically. “It’s football!”
    I roll my eyes. “So?”
    “So?” Adam mimicked. “This game is sacred! Awesome! It’s football!”
    “It’s also too long,” I whine. “I mean like, I Liebe it, I really do. But sitting around is torture,...

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AFTER The Story Of A Hero Named Kyle part 2 out of 2 XD

posted by GirlzRule312

As doctors rushed in and Mariah and Tiffany ran Weiter to Kyle, James sat there, looking at his brother, remembering all that they'd gone through, fighting evil monsters that don't exist, fighting bad guys, everything, they survived it all. Except the human race, their own species. He was about to cry but looked up and saw Mariah and Tiffany, crying. He hugged them tight, like Kyle used to. "It'll be ok" he said. "But what are we going to do?" sobbed Mariah. "Live on." sagte James and hugged them tighter. Later that evening James went to Kyle's house and looked under his bett and found a box. He...

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The Rules of a Horror Movie Ch.3

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 3
    The interview
    Approximately two days and we were off. Ashlynn was excitedly working on the script and Sasha was helping with the budget that the teacher just wouldn’t help with. Even with Fern’s influence she still didn’t trust us, maybe a little bit more, but still not that much. We were still undecided about the whole interviewing thing-y so we’ve just been searching on the internet and getting some old released police records.
    “Okay, so the horror Stunde is looking pretty good,” Sasha mutters as she...

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Why most art is to be left to interpretation

posted by DramaQueen1020

Would Du ask a writer about what their Schreiben means? First, hear (or read) what I have to say. If Du ask a poet what their work is about, what sorts of Fragen do Du think they hear all the time? 'Whats this mean? What's this about?' The artists get sick of it. Schreiben is a form of art. Art is meant to be not the same for everyone. Most artists want their work to be left to the viewers interpretation. Quoth one of my favourite writers:
"Does it mean this, does it mean that, that's all anybody wants to know. Fuck them darling. I say what any decent poet would say if Du dared ask him to...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.19

posted by Problematic129

    19
    Abe
    It seemed as if everything went quieter when Alex and Iris sat down, I could see we were all tensed and hopeful. Although it didn’t seem Iris had gotten over her anger of us how she never sagte a word and just frowned at her tray unless Alex was saying something to her.
    What irked me was that when Alex would talk to Iris, Du could tell it was really important Von the way they looked, but the geniuses had the conversations between the two in different languages. One Minute there speaking what...

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Charmed – Zauberhafte Hexen – Zauberhafte Hexen and Dangerous Ch. 10

posted by alicia386

Chapter Ten: I Always Lose At The Game of Chance

"Who would be dumb enough to follow us?" demanded Courtney who was already forgetting that Darrell almost kidnapped us. "Don't they know who they are messing with." Courtney sagte it a bit playful but playful was not the kind of mood we were looking for.
"You might be trained, but they are experienced and probably know 40 different ways to kill someone. It is best if we go hide out somewhere." Darrell kept his eyes on the road, those sky blue eyes.
"You're right," I said. "But where are Charles and Raven? We can't just...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.15

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
15
    Terry
    Lunchtime! Finally! It felt like ages before it came. Lunchtime has become a Favorit event for me lately, because now the gang and I can get to hang out together and just be ourselves.
    Marie wasn’t too happy about it when I told her the first time though, she glared at my Friends almost every time, and she’s been trying to push Brooklyn over the edge. But she doesn’t ruin our lunch, she doesn’t even come close.
    I know I’m not the only one with friend troubles,...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.27

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 27
    It takes a miracle
    Wednesday’s, one of my Favorit days, because on the Tag I was first born, I was born on Wednesday. The funny thing was my parents wanted to name me Wednesday, but Adam and Melanie kept on howling and yelling, so my mom picked Pamela, so my middle name is Wednesday.
    Why the name Pamela?
    I’ll tell Du why, I’m a miracle baby, Du know how some baby’s don’t come out perfect and the hospital has to hold them, well that’s what happened....

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Beauty is The Beast

posted by Dhampires

She looked at me throw narrow eyes droping her hostage to the floor she took a step toward me. She'd started to mouth off at me but I wasn't paying attention the only thing I had my eyes on was the man behind her.

He slowly drew a gun from his chest pocket before angling it at Camila's head he smiled at me and mouthed 'thanks'. I couldn't speak, I was speechless.

It was her words that brought me to life as of where I could run. "Duck he's going to kill you?"
"What?!" she sheirked turning to her attacker. He held a tight grin on his face. "Sweet dreams Princess." I could hear a faint Itialian...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.26

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 26
    Here my roar!
    I couldn’t stop gushing over the fact that Ryler kissed me! He kissed me! Best Tag ever! And I just couldn’t wait for our date, and Ryler wouldn’t be telling me anything, but it was pretty clear Adam knew. He’d always give me this secret smile, and wink.
    I wonder if I was obvious with my crush with Ryler, oder if Ryler told Adam from the beginning, oder just told him. All in all, I’m relieved there’s no ‘touch my sister and die’, everything seems normal....

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.24

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 24
    Maternal instinct
    “Oh! My lovely baby’s growing up!” My mom squeals while I hold a groan.
    “Mom please!” I whine. “Were here for shopping not gushing.”
    Mom rolled her eyes. “It’s clothes shopping, stupid. Gushing is mandatory. And Du in that dress! Oh the tears!”
    I smile as she clutches herself dramatically. “Whatever.”
    After that little get together, which wasn’t that bad when I look back...

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The keeper of the forbidden light chapter 4

posted by Annabeth788594

I stared in horror at what was in Blake’s computer I didn’t see this coming. What have I done? I felt like I was going to throw up. I can’t believe what I just gave him I am so stupid! I sighed me beating myself up is not going to change anything. All I can do now is find my brother find out what is going on and stop Blake before it is to late. What are Du waiting for it is time to come up with a plan to escape this nut house.

I took a flash drive and copied everything on Blake’s computer. I made sure there was no tracking device on the laptop double-checking found it clean than I packed...

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The Story Of A Hero Named Kyle Part 1

posted by GirlzRule312

After the war was finally finished, three years, seven months and twenty weeks, people waited at the hospital. Hoping, praying for their loved ones to be found. Kyle Goodman's Foster Dad; Angus, his two sisters; Tiffany and Mariah, brother James and girlfriend, Summer Thorn waited. Their friend, Katherine Dreamwhisper. They called her Katie for short, had finished her shift, working as the nurse and went to Mitmachen them. "They'll find him" she said. Nobody spoke, they just sat there. Three hours past and it was getting cold, the night air was coming and the warmth from the sun disappeared. Katie...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.21

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 21
    Just a lovely game
    I wasn’t even worried about our run in with Talia, in fact, I almost forgot about it. The rest of the Tag was spent on purely fun and I found myself humming as I unlocked the front door to my house. It was eerily quiet but I just shrugged, entering the house I found Ryler sprawled on the couch again eyes opened blankly.
    “Are Du dead?” I asked. “Because if Du are it’ll be a pain to Bewegen your body.”
    He...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.20

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 20
    When a psycho is near, chaos occurs
    Guess what? I was right! Adam’s team did lose, victory for Pam! Du could hear his sad frustrating voice on the other end as I was hanging out with my gal’s and surprisingly Grey. He just invited himself but I’m not complaining.
    “That movie was awesome!” Sage announced as we exited the movie theater.
    “Of course it was, I paid good money for it.” Grey replied.
    I...

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The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part Two)

posted by cuteypuffgirl

A/N: I Liebe Liebe loved the feedback I got for Part One! Not to mention the prompts :) I Liebe Du guys and I hope Du enjoy this one! Mehr feedback equals faster posts. Happy Lesen :)
ALSO: If you're new here, here's part one: link Anyways, enjoy!

The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part Two)

Prompt 1: Darkness (requested Von SweetHoneyBunny)

The darkness suffocates me.

I can’t see, I can’t breathe. My hands claw at nothingness as I
attempt to find a way out.

My breathing escalates. It feels as though my lungs are constricting.
Cold sweat breaks on my forehead and I find...

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Eye of the beholder, chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

fantasy
1 week later
Walter stood in the room where he had first used his wand, fighting off creatures coming out of Libras wand. Suddenly Will dropped his wand and looked at the monsters and oddly they all turned and started to attack Libra, "sorry Libra I can't use that power properly," Walter sagte and with a tendril shooting out of his wand and destroying all the monsters and quickly jolting back to his wand. " Walter don't worry your almost there you'll just have to be put under some re-,"Libra stopped mid sentence with a thoughtful look before continuing," go against me I will try my hardest...

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What I Took From It, Chapter Six

posted by flabaloobalah

Sadie and Claire's Ride

I was so nervous as to what we would be doing out in the woods in the middle of the night. I couldn't tell Claire, I decided. That would only scare us more. So I laid out the outfit they instructed I wear and took a dusche in the bathroom. The water was, at first, very cold, but I figured out how to work the nozzle and turn the freezing water into comfortable, steamy hot water. I made as many bubbles as I could and tried to distract myself, but I just couldn't. Sadie, I told myself, stop overthinking this. You'll be alright. We're just gonna play a game out there at night. I slicked my clean...

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We Can't Go On Pretending Tag Von Tag (country song)

posted by hgfan5602

This is reality
This is what Du call the Earth
This is what people call the world
This is what we call life

We can't go on pretending Tag Von day
That good things will always happen
Stormy days will come, it's not a miracle
But the storm will end soon, and all will be clear again

Heavy rain's crashing against my windowsill
I think, when will this ever stop?
The thunder's crashing against the trees outside
Today's not going to be a fine day, but it will end

I woke up this morning and guess what I saw
Bright sunny mornings with a clear future
No one's gonna stop me from believin
The rain stopped and the future's bright again

Good and bad create our lives
We can't pretend that everything's gonna always be alright
It's hard to think that something's gonna be wrong
But it's the truth, the whole truth.

We can't go on Tag Von Tag pretending
Everything's gonna be alright
But we know that sunny days will come out
Soon oder later.

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What I Took From It, Chapter Five

posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

I like Blake. He seemed to enjoy having company with our six cousins, and they all looked excited to do whatever they were going to do tonight. That reminded me: what exactly were we doing? I had no idea. I decided to just forget about it and enjoy the rest of the day. We all ran out back and explored th backyard. Past the shed were woods like the ones we traversed to get to Blake's. I guess they were all around us. Dark and inviting and creepy.
We had a few hours to run around outside, then we were called in for supper. Jeb stood Von the creaky back door...