True Writers Article: Princess Elizabeth chapter 1

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posted by riehlemarie

Once there lived a normal middle school girl, oder so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " Du look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth was a born princess, and the rightfull ruler of england, and that Rebecca, Elizabeth's mother, was the queen.

flash back

Right after Elizabeth was born Rebecca thought to herself, hmm I don't want my daughter to be raised like me without knowing of the world outside of the castle. So one night, around midnight, Rebecca snuck out of the schloss caring Elizabeth in a gift basket. Rebecca made sure to get some of her stuff and stuff for Elizabeth. Rebecca grabed; some food, baby clothing for Elizabeth, some normal clothes for herself, some toys for Elizabeth, and some money.

Rebecca was lucky nobody spoted her. Rebecca didn't want Elizabeth thinking that nobody mattered only herself so thats why she snuck out. Rebecca wanted to raise Elizabeth herself without all of her sevents, butlers, and cooks trying to do it all themselves. Rebecca bought two tickets to America to raise Elizabeth, she knew her husband wouldn't think about looking for her in other country's.

2 months later

When Rebecca finally made it to America, she was very happy to get off of the plain. At first, Rebecca didn't know what to do, but she soon got the hang of taking care of Elizabeth and herself. She got a job, found a daycare that was willing to take care of Elizabeth while she worked. She soon became Friends with almost all of the daycare teachers.

please look forword the Weiter chapter i hope Du enjoyed it.

alicia386 likes this

alicia386 Again, i love this story and I think you are a terrific writer. The part where you describe Rebecca escaping to America would have been better in a prologue. You can do it either way but . . . . . Don't be afraid to add some descriptive words in your story. Instead of saying it one way say it in a more intriguing. Other then that, it was really good!!

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Longing For Cassie Chapter 2

posted by vampirefreak_26

“You know he’s trouble don’t you?” Sofia stood at the entrance to the küche looking at her daughter with her gray wolf eyes. Cassie was used to her mother looking at her with those wolf eyes when she didn’t approve of something. “I’m going upstairs to change, I’ll be right down for dinner” she could still smell Gabriel’s scent, she would never forget it, he smelled like a warm summer breeze and musk. The first time she saw him she felt a pull towards him, a pull she tried to ignore. It was too dangerous, even now, thinking of him made her mouth water. To get involved with...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 16

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (16):
After Quickly changing into a black T-shirt with a picture of a sleepy face that sagte 'I got outta bett for this...', jeans shorts and a pair of boots Abbie ran downstairs to Mitmachen her family and Leo for breakfast, "Good Morning!!" she sagte as she stepped into the kitchen, "Ahh..look who showed up" sagte Noah, "I thought Du were going to sleep in" he added, "Shut up" she sagte as she pulled a bottle of orange saft out of the fridge, "all right, I gotta jet, bye" sagte Noah getting to his feet, "Where are Du going?!" asked Abbie who choked on her orange juice, "A friend of mine,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 15

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (15):
Abbie stared at the spot where Lily had just vanished, and wondering wether she might actually Zeigen up to talk to her, she turned away walking behind her parents and her brother Noah, Leo walking Weiter to her "I saw him, that boy" she said, "What boy?" asked Leo, "The boy in the gernie" sagte Abbie, "The one who almost died?" asked Leo again, "Yes and he did die Von the way they just brought him back" replied Abbie, "Did Lily see him?" he asked curios Mehr than ever, "Yes, and he almost gave up if it weren't for her I would have been dealing with two ghosts not one" answered Abbie,...

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A Little Bit Mehr Than Liebe (Part 1, Chapter 1)

posted by dragonsmemory

THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT Mehr THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 1

Kikikyo stared straight ahead as he flew. Clutched in one foreclaw was a book of centaurian poetry. His father, King Parthurnax, disapproved of the centaurian Liebe poems contained within the book.

"Love? Bah! In my day, we didn't have anything called love. Du modern Drachen aren't tough," his father had sagte the week before. Kikikyo could remember thinking, <Here we go again. Another speech on how the ancient Drachen were better.> Between his young son (at the tender age of ten-and-seven) and...

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The Inevitable Fate chapter 2

posted by rory2011

the last paper from Mary's life fall down ,she know why she will die ,it's not just because the money ,it's because she's a woman in a poor family in this terrible world ,but she can't do anything now
Mary put her sons in their beds wishing for them a good dreams ,her tear was in her green eyes ,her tear give her eyes sparkle

Mary and David thought that the kids are in a deep sleep ,so they took their chance to change their clothes and get ready to go when the sun will start to rise
Mary was looking at the sky from the window ,David were sitting Weiter to her ,but his eyes were on the floor...

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The Fragile Ballerina Figure

posted by sawfan13

The tiny ballerina figurine
As unique as an owl in winter
As beautiful as Weihnachten morning joy
It stands alone, looking at the other toys in the girl's room.
She remembers when she first got her.
Her birthday.
Will never forget her reaction.
Other Puppen came and went
But not the little figurine.
She dances slowly as the girl falls asleep
Her porcelin skin cold and shiny
Pretty white tutu dress
Always ready to dance and bring happiness
One Tag she was ignored
Weeks and days went by
Her owner, forgetting her presence.
The girl grew more, and her nightlight went
Making the ballerina feel scared and alone.
The...

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The Curse of the Werwölfe (short story)

posted by hgfan5602

One dark and cloudy night, a couple of Werwölfe howled, awakening Mehr and Mehr werewolves. They set a curse upon the world that would destroy all humans. The people of the world had hunted millions of wolves, a great number of them werewolves, and as a result, had killed millions of werewolves. Now, the Werwölfe were seeking revenge.

As Byron woke up on a foggy morning, he was alarmed Von the sound of wind rushing by, followed Von loud howls. But as he looked out his bedroom window, he saw nothing. Byron raced downstairs, and seeing his parents were asleep, he went outside. Byron was ten,...

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Remember me Ch.1

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the Kommentare :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Three years later
    Beep! Beep! Beep!
    I moved my hand and turned off my alarm clock, wow, it’s six o` clock already. I groan as I rub my eyes and slowly get our of bed. I took a shower, the warm water wakes me up a bit. After I finish drying off, I put some clothes on.
    As I walk to the mirror, I feel compelled to look at myself again, I’ve felt compelled too ever since Dorothy died. We’ve always had this connection,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 12

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (12):
Abbie and Leo were walking in the hallways during study hall, they stopped because Leo had to grab his French book , Abbie spotted Susie and Brad in the crowd of students, Susie was whispering something to Brad, after she was done his eyes widened and he glared at Susie, "Does your mom know?" Abbie heard him say, "Shh!" sagte Susie, then they were both whispering again, "Ab!" sagte Leo, "That's the third time I've spotted Du like this!" he said, "I'm sorry" she said, "What are so interested in?" he asked, "Susie" she whispered, "Susie Gellar, Lily's sister?" he whispered, "Yes"...

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The Dying Leader

posted by alicia386

This is a continuation of The Dying Ashes. I am Katherine Adams and I have received this manuscript my aunt had sent me weeks ago. She has gone missing. I fear for her life and I wish not to speak of her. I must continur this tale.

I knew Dylon very well. He was like a Sekunde father to me so his death took a great toll on me. To continue my aunt's research I have had to follow those four demigods very closely. I have learned so much about them. I think that maybe it is better to Bewegen from city to city so they can't get a good lead on where I am. So far it has worked.

Gabriel and Maycen were...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl: Prologue

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

"SAUMENSCH!" I hollered from Weiter door. Saumensch isn't really the nicest thing Du can call someone, it is like an insult, that is, like calling someone a pig in America. But right now, I am not in America, I am in Germany, so live with it. You'll get used to it, don't worry. "SAUKERL!" Matna hollered back. Saukerl is about the same thing, except used to call men and boys that, while Saumensch is used to call girls and women that. Her name is Matna Johanasen.Anyways, my name is Carls. Carls Shotansen. Pleased to meet you. The story of "Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl" all started on one foggy night...when everyone was asleep, except for one very peculiar being. And, he, was not German. He bore the symbol of the star, sterne of David. He was a Jew.

Star of David

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.15 and 16

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the Kommentare :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 15
    You’re a Pyke, darling, not a Connor
    There he was Marcus Pyke, not Connor, and there was one picture of him, and it was my father. Which meant he used to be Marcus Pike, not Connor. But that means he must’ve changed his name, and mom kept the same one.
    Why?
    Your guess is as good as mine.
    There was another picture, way at the bottom, it was of father, my mom, a little...

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Trapped Angel: Chapter 1

posted by sawfan13

Chapter 1

"Excuse me?" He sagte quietly, staring at this woman with confusion. She got on all fours, crawled to him, and said,"I
wanna keep Du forever." He furrowed his eyebrows and asked,"What? What Du mean? What the hell is going on here?" She leaned down to his ear and whispered seductively,
"This can go either way, Criss. Promise and I can be your slaves, or," she continued, even quieter and scarier than before,"you can become ours." Criss shuddered in a bad way. No human being on this earth had ever been this way before. Sure, his Fan base was pretty insane and he's met a few less than sane...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 6
    Breaking news
    A few hours later, and Du found all of us racing out of the movie theater to our car, which we thankfully parked far away from the scene. We jumped in and when we all finally stepped through Lara’s front door we burst out laughing, falling to the floor.
    “There faces!”
    “Their reactions!”
    “That was so fun!”
    “You should have seen that dude! The balloon...

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Hourglass - Chapter Three

posted by alicia386

~Please read it and Kommentar at the bottom~
Thanks!

Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy oder sadness? He couldn't tell. When Du think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came Von this morning. She asked him out on a datum and he sagte sure. He couldn't believe he sagte that.

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's

posted by Problematic129

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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. Du see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother Bewegen back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...

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The Boy Who Cried wolf spinne Prologue.

posted by sawfan13

Prologue

Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital bett were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.

It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, Du may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...

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Troy, The Almighty Fatty

posted by alicia386

Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a Jahr and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a Monat before we started packing. Ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane Essen is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.13

posted by alicia386

Wednesday

First Tag of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer oder Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read Bücher and she thought that maybe I could meet some new Friends that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is Von tomorrow.

An Introduction to my mystery novel

posted by adamk

After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at Schreiben a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm Schreiben is in the in the section below. If Du like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen Jahr old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.