Hey, fellow pridelander..today i'm posting my first ever Artikel after joining Fanpop for almost 3 year.
well, to be honest i'm Mehr like a reader than a writer so please don't be rude if there's something wrong oder Du don't like...Constructive Criticism appreciate.
THE
Lion kinG
Disclaimer : *proudly* Lion King are mind *disney cleared their throat* ...okay not mind
shall we start ?
Endless Night
"Psst, Hey ?, Nala !" 'ugh, what did he want this time ?' thought Nala while opening one of her eyes to look at the golden cub who disturbing her sleep. "come on, get up! I wanna Zeigen Du something." sagte Simba, the young prince of the Prideland and also her frie...pardon her BEST friend.
"Simba, last time Du were saying that we ended up chased Von those Hyenas" groaned Nala. "you can Zeigen me that 'something' in the morning"nshe continued the closing her eyes, ready to sleep again.
" Nala..." moaned Simba, getting impatient. "this cannot be wait until morning" he continued. Didn't want to getting another problem, Nala decided it'll be the best choice to just ignore him and continue her sleep.
" Nala ?.." cricked heard no answer. losing his patience, he shocked her shoulder while yelling "Nala !!" . lot of 'ssshhh' ranged the cave as all the löwin also want their peaceful sleep. ears pinned, Simba look at Nala who had both her eyes wide open,
"you going to wake everyone up !" sagte Nala
"I.Don't.Care." answered Simba
'He would just keep trying if I didn't come with him' Nala sighed, then get up. "alright, what is it ?" asked Nala.
"just follow my lead" sagte Simba while smiling. He led her out of the cave onto the edge of Priderock. sitting on his haunch he then lift his face to look at the sky. "look at the stars Nala !".
Sitting Weiter to his spot, Nala follow his example. what she sees make her teal, knickente, blaugrün eyes mesmerize. she never really realize how beautiful the shiny stars is especially if Du combine with prideland's landscape. "Simba...it's beautiful" replied Nala. Lost in thougt.
"My father sagte the great king of the past are up there...watching over us" sagte Simba who brought his face back to look at Nala.
Hearing what Simba said, something pop up in her head. she turn her head and meet Simba's gaze who eyed her intently. "Simba...do Du think my father...also up there ?"
This caught Simba off guard. he never really know who her father is . but then he put a smile after remember what her father taught him. "yea, I'm sure he is up there, guiding and watching over you" answered Simba.
She couldn't help but smile after hearing her best friend answer.closing her eyes she slowly leaned to the side of his face and lick him on the cheek. she didn't know what make her do that, but it feel so right. opening her eyes, she could see his reaction which is stiffened.'pinned ya'
The End
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so what do Du think ?
adang
well, to be honest i'm Mehr like a reader than a writer so please don't be rude if there's something wrong oder Du don't like...Constructive Criticism appreciate.
THE
Lion kinG
Disclaimer : *proudly* Lion King are mind *disney cleared their throat* ...okay not mind
shall we start ?
Endless Night
"Psst, Hey ?, Nala !" 'ugh, what did he want this time ?' thought Nala while opening one of her eyes to look at the golden cub who disturbing her sleep. "come on, get up! I wanna Zeigen Du something." sagte Simba, the young prince of the Prideland and also her frie...pardon her BEST friend.
"Simba, last time Du were saying that we ended up chased Von those Hyenas" groaned Nala. "you can Zeigen me that 'something' in the morning"nshe continued the closing her eyes, ready to sleep again.
" Nala..." moaned Simba, getting impatient. "this cannot be wait until morning" he continued. Didn't want to getting another problem, Nala decided it'll be the best choice to just ignore him and continue her sleep.
" Nala ?.." cricked heard no answer. losing his patience, he shocked her shoulder while yelling "Nala !!" . lot of 'ssshhh' ranged the cave as all the löwin also want their peaceful sleep. ears pinned, Simba look at Nala who had both her eyes wide open,
"you going to wake everyone up !" sagte Nala
"I.Don't.Care." answered Simba
'He would just keep trying if I didn't come with him' Nala sighed, then get up. "alright, what is it ?" asked Nala.
"just follow my lead" sagte Simba while smiling. He led her out of the cave onto the edge of Priderock. sitting on his haunch he then lift his face to look at the sky. "look at the stars Nala !".
Sitting Weiter to his spot, Nala follow his example. what she sees make her teal, knickente, blaugrün eyes mesmerize. she never really realize how beautiful the shiny stars is especially if Du combine with prideland's landscape. "Simba...it's beautiful" replied Nala. Lost in thougt.
"My father sagte the great king of the past are up there...watching over us" sagte Simba who brought his face back to look at Nala.
Hearing what Simba said, something pop up in her head. she turn her head and meet Simba's gaze who eyed her intently. "Simba...do Du think my father...also up there ?"
This caught Simba off guard. he never really know who her father is . but then he put a smile after remember what her father taught him. "yea, I'm sure he is up there, guiding and watching over you" answered Simba.
She couldn't help but smile after hearing her best friend answer.closing her eyes she slowly leaned to the side of his face and lick him on the cheek. she didn't know what make her do that, but it feel so right. opening her eyes, she could see his reaction which is stiffened.'pinned ya'
The End
_________________________________________
so what do Du think ?
adang