Pipes

Annabeth

I was walking through the thron room, talking to my mother, Athena. Yes, the goddess of wisdom and war strategy. We were admiring my work.

"Very good Annabeth. I'm glad to say my own daughter is-- A SPIDER!!!!"
I looked at Athena, confused. I'm not a spider! That's when she pointed to her statue and screamed.

I cringed, then looked at the statue. How bad could it be? The worst thing that could happen is it could be a- "SPIDER!!" I screamed.

I looked at my mother, terrified. Her grey eyes were wide, full of fear.
"DON'T LOOK AT ME!! GO GET SOMETHING SO WE CAN KILL THIS DESPICABLE THING!"...

Hey guys, i was just wondering, judging Von this prologue, would read my fanfic if i wrote one? now, im not saying that i'll actually be Schreiben one, cuz i have a really busy summer, but i just want your opinion of it. like, is it any good? I would HIGHLY appreciate constructive critiscim. i want Du to nit-pick. Spelling mistakes, grammar, choppy oder awkward sentences, run-on sentences, being too descriptive, out-of-character thoughts oder actions, stupid/weak ideas, anything! just be polite about it :)
PS: i know, its a bit long for a prologue, but i couldnt help myself!

And voila! Here it is:

The...

Alternative Endings of Percy Jackson (Part 1).
So, this is how I entertain myself, ticking people off, especially PJ’s fans!
R U READY TO BE TICKED OFF?    
I heard IT’S A YES!

1/The X-files ending: Since he killed a minor god, Percy is taken to the court of Olympia. He claims to have been controlled by…aliens. The gods don’t believe him. But Annabeth and Grover believe that the gods are hiding aliens to fullfill their dark conspiracy of making a god-alien…hybrid race that could become slaves for the aliens when the colonization begins. In the ending, all the gods...

So hi, well I've been thinkin' about my chapter story The Somewhat Less Important Chronicles of Elle Trick, and how there's just soo much stuff that Du guys should know to really get her. So here it is,

December 21, 1993- Elle and her twin Missy are born, although both have different mothers. Missy and Elle are twins entirely on accident. They never meet until they are seventeen.

January 4, 1994- Elle has her first vision, this is of fire, later that Tag her brother burned is hand on the stove.


May 19, 1999- It is revealed to Elle and Garcon that they are demigods.


January 1, 2007- Jumelle and...

i see the hottest girl at camp.
first things first,your not a demigod until Du meet Lupa so dont get your hopes up to be a demigod.Im Jason Grace son of jupiter and well extremely good at sword fighting and lupa says i'll be special someday.
Lupa is a she wolf yes i sagte a she wolf dont let her see Du laugh cause she'll rip to shreds.
She meets demigods and lead them to the wolf house and choose if your weak oder not.So sad for gary truckner.
Anyway as i'm introducing people i should tell Du my life is weird.I was taken away Von juno and my sis Thalia (probally not a demigod but i have a strange...

ANYONE MAY READ THIS AS LONG AS THEY DON'T MIND SPOILERS FROM HOH!

HERE IS MY POINT-I THINK LEO IS GOING TO DIE! THERE! I sagte IT( I just killed my self doing so but) I sagte IT!

sorry for making this so short but this all i could think of so far..

here is my proof-

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Gaia sagte that she would get her revenge-
i know this doesn't count as much as she sagte that to everyone but she thinks that he is the one to die first. She has been plotting his death for much longer. what if this is because she knows that he is also the one to stop HER?! That...

Okay, so I've decided to do a review for each of the five books, starting with of course, The Lost Hero. These are my opinions so please respect them, thank you:)

Character/Narrator Review



Jason: I didn't quite like him, but I didn't hate him either. I guess I'm Mehr neutral to him than anything? When I rank the seven from best to worst, he'd probably be number 6, but before I read The Mark of Athena he would be number 7.

Anyway, onto reviewing his actual character. I don't know, I kind of found him to be the most boring character in this book, and I wasn't quite as hyped Lesen Jason...

        Esmeralda Storm

Chapter 1

    “Can Du keep a secret?”
    “Yes; why?”
    “I have never told anyone before. Are Du sure, Hope?”
    “Yes. Start I'm listening.”
    “I have wing's!”
    “NO-WAY!!! Are Du serious? Zeigen me then I will believe you.”
I took of my jacke and my wing's fluttered out behind me.
    “NO WAY; Du DO, CAN Du FLY, DO THEY-”
    “Yes I can...

This Vorschau of the House of Hades came out with the Son of Sobek eBook. It took some time, but I wrote it all out for everyone. Have fun dealing with the feels. :)

Disclaimer: All rights go to Rick Riordan. ^-^

Chapter 1

HAZEL

DURING THE THIRD ATTACK, Hazel almost ate a boulder. She was peering into the fog, wondering how it could be so difficult to fly across one stupid mountain range, when the ship's alarm bells sounded.
"Hard to port!" Nico yelled from the foremast of the flying ship.
Back at the helm, Leo yanked the wheel. The Argo II veered left, its aerial oars slashing through the clouds...