Alright, once again, Romeo and Juliet, but I made a few changes to some scenes. Alright, enjoy.
Duncan's P.O.V
Wow, that was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. When I saw her, it seemed like I've known her forever. Back to Courtney, I finally found her sitting down at a table. "Hey babe." I greeted Courtney. She gave me a nasty look. "What do Du want, Duncan?" Courtney carelessly asked me. "I wanted to know if Du wanted to do something on Saturday." I calmly stated. She rolled her eyes at me. "Go jump off of a cliff. For Du are a Montague, a neanderthal. Go pester some other girl." she ordered me. I smirked at her. "C'mon babe. I'll tell Du how beautiful Du are." I complimented her. Courtney flipped her hair back. "Well, I am one heck of a sight, but I do not Liebe you. I may not Liebe a dirty Montague, nothing but no good thugs." she insulted me. This was not a shock for me. It was regular for Courtney to put me in shame, but I know she wants me. She just doesn't realize it yet. I walked away. Before I left the Capulet party, I had to talk to that gorgeous girl again. When I noticed that she and her so called 'date' I think were done dancing, I walked up to her. She smiled at me. I smiled back. I wasn't sure what to say. She held out her hand and said, "Gwen." I took her hand, shook it, and said, "Duncan." When we touched hands, it felt like electricity. We were staring at each other again. I was gazing into her dark, breath taking eyes. I finally spoke, "So, um, how's it going?" "Fine, I guess." Suddenly a punk rock song came on. "I Liebe this song." we both sagte at the same time. I pulled out a chair from a tabelle and held my hand out, gesturing her to sit down. She took a seat. "Thx Duncan." she thanked me. "Don't sweat it." I responded. We started to talk a little. She made me laugh, I made her laugh. The way she was able to get me from goo-goo eyed over Courtney, from in a calm, friendly mood just got me going. I loved, oh, I mean liked that about her. She suddenly became curious. "Hey, how come I've never saw Du around the nation of Capulets?" she asked me. B-U-S-T-E-D! "Um, I......just joined the union." I lied. She whispered to me, "It's cool, I know you're a Montague. But, if my father ever sees Du near me, oder even in this room, he will kill you. I think Du should go." A slow song came on. I stood up. "Wanna dance?" I questioned her. "Duncan, you'll get caught." she warned me. "Awww, Du care about me." I teased her. She chuckled and stood up. I held both hands on her waist as she hung both hands over my shoulders. We began dancing. It felt nice to have someone that I trusted, even if I haven't known her for a long time. I don't know why, but every time I get close to Gwen, I never want to go away. She's like my strahl, ray of sunshine, and I can't believe I'm saying this, but the Liebe of my life. I was Lost in a trance. We were still dancing. I felt a tap on my shoulder. It was Gwen. "Duncan, my dad's coming this way." she informed me. I broke away from our tight grip. I gave Gwen a KISS on the cheek and left, but before I could, I just had to see her again. I turned around and looked in her direction as she was waving. I winked at her and headed off.
Gwen's P.O.V
Wow, that was the best night of my life. I met this really cute guy and I think he might like me. He was just so perfect. He really understood me, it seems like he wasn't the royal stuck up type either. He seemed to like dark colors, punk rock music, and Eeeeeee! Alright, I just sounded like a little girl, but I think I'm in love. My dad took me home. We talked about the Trent proposal, but I wasn't interested. When we got home, I flopped myself on my bed. I couldn't stop thinking about Duncan. He is just soooooo sweet! I stepped out on my balcony for fresh air. Now, I was talking to no one. "Ugh, o.k, I Liebe Duncan. He's the sweetest guy in the world. He's funny, cute, smart and he's interested in all of the things that I am into. At the dance, It just felt so magical, like we had a special connection that no one else in the universe did!" I confessed. I sighed and rested my head on the palm of my right hand. I heard rustling in the bushes.
Duncan's P.O.V
I'm going crazy about Gwen. I'm going to go see her again. I sneaked my way to the schloss of Capulets. I climbed up the closest balcony. Just when I was about to slip and fall, I felt a hand grab me. The hand pulled me up from possible death. It was Gwen. I pulled her into a hug. She hugged me back. After 10 seconds, Gwen pulled away. "Duncan, what the hell are Du doing here?" Gwen sagte while she slapped my arm. "Alright, first of all, oww! And second, I came to see you." I tried to charm her. Gwen blushed. "Well, um, you're going to get caught." she tried to persuade me. "I don't care. Gwen, ever since the dance, I couldn't stop thinking about you. That dance, it was magical. It felt like we had a special connection that neither one of us could deny." I explained. "Oh, Duncan, I-" she paused and looked backwards. "My dad is calling me." she rushed me. Gwen gave me a quick KISS on the lips. "Listen Duncan, I really like Du too, b-but-" she hesitated. I could hear her father's footsteps coming closer. "We'll talk some other time." she sagte as she shoved me down the balcony. I blew her a KISS and I sped off.
Gwen's P.O.V
He likes me? He likes me! And I can't believe we kissed and he was totally cool about it. I acted cool about it too, but I totally wanted to go, "Eeeeeee!", inside. My father came out on the balcony. "What was that?" he asked me. "Um, nothing, I was just going to bed." I hesitated and headed inside. "Gwen, Trent and the whole family are going to meet and discuss your marriage." he instructed me. "I didn't even agree to this marriage, why are we already so deep into it?" I quizzed him. "Because Gwen, Du will marry Trent. He is a promising man. Rich, handsome, what Mehr could Du ever want?" he asked me. "Oh, I don't know, maybe someone who's Mehr my style. Someone who understands me." I blurted out. He shot daggers at me. "Good night Gwen." he muttered and then closed the door.
Duncan's P.O.V
Wow, that was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. When I saw her, it seemed like I've known her forever. Back to Courtney, I finally found her sitting down at a table. "Hey babe." I greeted Courtney. She gave me a nasty look. "What do Du want, Duncan?" Courtney carelessly asked me. "I wanted to know if Du wanted to do something on Saturday." I calmly stated. She rolled her eyes at me. "Go jump off of a cliff. For Du are a Montague, a neanderthal. Go pester some other girl." she ordered me. I smirked at her. "C'mon babe. I'll tell Du how beautiful Du are." I complimented her. Courtney flipped her hair back. "Well, I am one heck of a sight, but I do not Liebe you. I may not Liebe a dirty Montague, nothing but no good thugs." she insulted me. This was not a shock for me. It was regular for Courtney to put me in shame, but I know she wants me. She just doesn't realize it yet. I walked away. Before I left the Capulet party, I had to talk to that gorgeous girl again. When I noticed that she and her so called 'date' I think were done dancing, I walked up to her. She smiled at me. I smiled back. I wasn't sure what to say. She held out her hand and said, "Gwen." I took her hand, shook it, and said, "Duncan." When we touched hands, it felt like electricity. We were staring at each other again. I was gazing into her dark, breath taking eyes. I finally spoke, "So, um, how's it going?" "Fine, I guess." Suddenly a punk rock song came on. "I Liebe this song." we both sagte at the same time. I pulled out a chair from a tabelle and held my hand out, gesturing her to sit down. She took a seat. "Thx Duncan." she thanked me. "Don't sweat it." I responded. We started to talk a little. She made me laugh, I made her laugh. The way she was able to get me from goo-goo eyed over Courtney, from in a calm, friendly mood just got me going. I loved, oh, I mean liked that about her. She suddenly became curious. "Hey, how come I've never saw Du around the nation of Capulets?" she asked me. B-U-S-T-E-D! "Um, I......just joined the union." I lied. She whispered to me, "It's cool, I know you're a Montague. But, if my father ever sees Du near me, oder even in this room, he will kill you. I think Du should go." A slow song came on. I stood up. "Wanna dance?" I questioned her. "Duncan, you'll get caught." she warned me. "Awww, Du care about me." I teased her. She chuckled and stood up. I held both hands on her waist as she hung both hands over my shoulders. We began dancing. It felt nice to have someone that I trusted, even if I haven't known her for a long time. I don't know why, but every time I get close to Gwen, I never want to go away. She's like my strahl, ray of sunshine, and I can't believe I'm saying this, but the Liebe of my life. I was Lost in a trance. We were still dancing. I felt a tap on my shoulder. It was Gwen. "Duncan, my dad's coming this way." she informed me. I broke away from our tight grip. I gave Gwen a KISS on the cheek and left, but before I could, I just had to see her again. I turned around and looked in her direction as she was waving. I winked at her and headed off.
Gwen's P.O.V
Wow, that was the best night of my life. I met this really cute guy and I think he might like me. He was just so perfect. He really understood me, it seems like he wasn't the royal stuck up type either. He seemed to like dark colors, punk rock music, and Eeeeeee! Alright, I just sounded like a little girl, but I think I'm in love. My dad took me home. We talked about the Trent proposal, but I wasn't interested. When we got home, I flopped myself on my bed. I couldn't stop thinking about Duncan. He is just soooooo sweet! I stepped out on my balcony for fresh air. Now, I was talking to no one. "Ugh, o.k, I Liebe Duncan. He's the sweetest guy in the world. He's funny, cute, smart and he's interested in all of the things that I am into. At the dance, It just felt so magical, like we had a special connection that no one else in the universe did!" I confessed. I sighed and rested my head on the palm of my right hand. I heard rustling in the bushes.
Duncan's P.O.V
I'm going crazy about Gwen. I'm going to go see her again. I sneaked my way to the schloss of Capulets. I climbed up the closest balcony. Just when I was about to slip and fall, I felt a hand grab me. The hand pulled me up from possible death. It was Gwen. I pulled her into a hug. She hugged me back. After 10 seconds, Gwen pulled away. "Duncan, what the hell are Du doing here?" Gwen sagte while she slapped my arm. "Alright, first of all, oww! And second, I came to see you." I tried to charm her. Gwen blushed. "Well, um, you're going to get caught." she tried to persuade me. "I don't care. Gwen, ever since the dance, I couldn't stop thinking about you. That dance, it was magical. It felt like we had a special connection that neither one of us could deny." I explained. "Oh, Duncan, I-" she paused and looked backwards. "My dad is calling me." she rushed me. Gwen gave me a quick KISS on the lips. "Listen Duncan, I really like Du too, b-but-" she hesitated. I could hear her father's footsteps coming closer. "We'll talk some other time." she sagte as she shoved me down the balcony. I blew her a KISS and I sped off.
Gwen's P.O.V
He likes me? He likes me! And I can't believe we kissed and he was totally cool about it. I acted cool about it too, but I totally wanted to go, "Eeeeeee!", inside. My father came out on the balcony. "What was that?" he asked me. "Um, nothing, I was just going to bed." I hesitated and headed inside. "Gwen, Trent and the whole family are going to meet and discuss your marriage." he instructed me. "I didn't even agree to this marriage, why are we already so deep into it?" I quizzed him. "Because Gwen, Du will marry Trent. He is a promising man. Rich, handsome, what Mehr could Du ever want?" he asked me. "Oh, I don't know, maybe someone who's Mehr my style. Someone who understands me." I blurted out. He shot daggers at me. "Good night Gwen." he muttered and then closed the door.
the night that changed it all
