Haze went flying across the area,but caught himself,Rei whacked him quickly with his tail,Mother came from behind and slashed him,leaving several marks on Rei's back,Rei turned aroud quickly and kicked her away. Nocturn punched Rei over and over,but no effect.
Rei grabbed Nocturn Von the face,and throws him away. Shockwave punched Rei in the back,making a SHOCKWAVE,sending them both flying. Soundwave clapped his hands together hard,making a SOUNDWAVE,and making Rei fall to the ground,but got back up and growled.
Rei smashed the ground,sending an EARTHQUAKE at SOUNDWAVE AND SHOCKWAVE. (:D) Which made them both go flying. Then Typhoon punched Rei in the face,Rei smacked him away. Haze sliced Rei,making a mark on Rei's chest,then Rei turned his hand into a blade,and sliced Haze's arm!
Haze jumped back,and grabbed his arm,He then charged,jumped and kicked Rei,with all of his might,sending Rei back a few feet,but Rei just backhanded him through several trees.
"CABOOSE TO THE RESCUE!!!!" Yelled Caboose as he slammed into Rei's stomach,Rei growled and knocked him back,Caboose caught himself,and his eyes were glowing red,Caboose punched Rei into a large rock,and when Rei hit the rock,it teilt, split in two.
Caboose came behind Rei,and grabbed his tail,and started to whirl around,and around,and around,and then he finally let go,making Rei hit the side of a ledge. Rei jumped out of the crater he made when he hit the ledge,Furious,he held his hand back,and his hand opened,then he Lunged it foward,sending a blast at him.
Caboose,quick to react,Dodged as fast as he could,then he pointed his arm,and his arm turned into a blaster,then he fired a bunch of plasma bolts at Rei,injuring him,and maaking him fall to the ground. Caboose put one foot on Rei,then pointed his arm blaster at Rei.
Rei hand suddenly turned into a blade,then he sliced Caboose off of him,then hammered him to the ground,finally throws him near a mouth of a cave,then fired a blast at the oben, nach oben of the mouth of the cave,Caboose looked up,seeing HUGE rocks heading for him,he held the large rock upbove his head.
Mehr rocks came,making the HUGE rock heavier,Heavier,Heavier,Until Caboose's gears could turn no more,and his strength gone,the Huge rock CRUSHED Caboose,All that was seeable was Caboose's arm,with cracks all over it.
Caboose,Was no more.
What will happen next? Find out Weiter time...!
Rei grabbed Nocturn Von the face,and throws him away. Shockwave punched Rei in the back,making a SHOCKWAVE,sending them both flying. Soundwave clapped his hands together hard,making a SOUNDWAVE,and making Rei fall to the ground,but got back up and growled.
Rei smashed the ground,sending an EARTHQUAKE at SOUNDWAVE AND SHOCKWAVE. (:D) Which made them both go flying. Then Typhoon punched Rei in the face,Rei smacked him away. Haze sliced Rei,making a mark on Rei's chest,then Rei turned his hand into a blade,and sliced Haze's arm!
Haze jumped back,and grabbed his arm,He then charged,jumped and kicked Rei,with all of his might,sending Rei back a few feet,but Rei just backhanded him through several trees.
"CABOOSE TO THE RESCUE!!!!" Yelled Caboose as he slammed into Rei's stomach,Rei growled and knocked him back,Caboose caught himself,and his eyes were glowing red,Caboose punched Rei into a large rock,and when Rei hit the rock,it teilt, split in two.
Caboose came behind Rei,and grabbed his tail,and started to whirl around,and around,and around,and then he finally let go,making Rei hit the side of a ledge. Rei jumped out of the crater he made when he hit the ledge,Furious,he held his hand back,and his hand opened,then he Lunged it foward,sending a blast at him.
Caboose,quick to react,Dodged as fast as he could,then he pointed his arm,and his arm turned into a blaster,then he fired a bunch of plasma bolts at Rei,injuring him,and maaking him fall to the ground. Caboose put one foot on Rei,then pointed his arm blaster at Rei.
Rei hand suddenly turned into a blade,then he sliced Caboose off of him,then hammered him to the ground,finally throws him near a mouth of a cave,then fired a blast at the oben, nach oben of the mouth of the cave,Caboose looked up,seeing HUGE rocks heading for him,he held the large rock upbove his head.
Mehr rocks came,making the HUGE rock heavier,Heavier,Heavier,Until Caboose's gears could turn no more,and his strength gone,the Huge rock CRUSHED Caboose,All that was seeable was Caboose's arm,with cracks all over it.
Caboose,Was no more.
What will happen next? Find out Weiter time...!
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power oder darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
