What do Du think of this?

Couldn't have done better myself.

The face needs widened Mehr at the top, and the eyes need Mehr Weltraum between them. The shoulders are wonky and asymmetrical, and the face also needs to be softened and Mehr symmetrical. The hair is textureless and bland, the arms are rather wonky and don't seem to connect up well, and the proportions are rather off. (But don't worry, I also suck at proportions). also, the jewelry needs to come off the skin so it doesn't look like it's branded to them oder tattooed. Add Mehr texture to the clothes like wrinkles. Also, the breasts could use a bit Mehr shape.
(Exhales)
But it's rather good, despite the all the criticism I gave. I've seen far worse drawings from people that can't accept any criticism whatsoever. Du have a lot of potential. :3
Keep drawing, friend. ^-^

I think you've got quite a bit of potential in art. Your body proportions are close to being accurate and insgesamt this is a good drawing- I imagine that 70% of the Earth's population couldn't draw like this.

However there are some things Du should focus on improving, largely with face proportions, symmetry and detail. The face proportions are pretty okay aside from the eyes being too close together and the chin is offset. The shoulders and breasts are rather asymmetrical as well. I'd also pay close attention to the way in which clothing lays on people. Her dress and gürtel look skin tight while the sleeves are just kind of bulky and hanging on nothing. Very rarely- if ever- do clothes interact like this in reality.
I would also pay closer attention to the way hair forms as it seems you're having the same problem with it as the clothes.

I would also keep in mind later down the line that it isn't common that we're going to be looking at someone completely straight vorwärts-, nach vorn with a stiff pose. This is fine for starting out, but once Du get a grasp on the basics and fundamentals and are Mehr comfortable with what you're doing, try experimenting with expressions, poses, composition, and perspective. Backgrounds play a big role in making cohesive art as well. But that's all stuff that can wait until Du get Mehr fundamentals down.


insgesamt there's nothing here that can't be fixed with a bit of practice and some dedication. You're doing well, and Du should keep going if you'd like to.

It's a little bit creepy.

This remind me of 1950s Disney Princess