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my little buttercup!!!

that was just to get your attention, i want to know if Du would read this, i am not done yet, this is just a snippet of it, but please tell me if Du would read the whole thing.

Daniel was walking Home from school one day. He looked over and saw a new girl he had never seen before. She seemed lonely. He walked over to her. “Hi.” He said. The girl looked up and saw him. “Hi.” She said. “I’m Daniel.” He says as he sits down Weiter to her. “I’m Miya.” She says.
“Are Du new here?” he asks. “Yeah.” Says Miya, smiling. Daniel smiles. “I have to get home.” Says Miya as she stands up. “Oh, well let me walk Du home.” He says. “You don’t have to do that.” She says to him. “But I want to.” Says Daniel. “No.” says Miya. She runs away. Daniel follows her. “Miya, Miya wait!” he yelled. She stopped in the middle of a crosswalk. “What do Du want?” she asks. Daniel catches up. “Please let me take Du home.” He says. “No!” says Miya. Then, they hear the screeching of tires. Daniel looks over and sees a car speeding towards them. Miya screams. Daniel knew he had to do something. He pushed Miya out of the way. Then, the car rams into Daniel. “Daniel!” screams Miya. People who saw what happened rushed over. But it was Miya who got to his side first. “I’m so sorry.” She says as she puts him in her arms. “Somebody call an ambulance!” yells Miya. One of the people takes out their cell phone and dial 911. Miya cries with Daniel in her arms. Then, she realizes he is not breathing. She sets him down on the pavement. “I’m sorry, Daniel.” She says. She turns around and walks away. That was the end of Daniel.



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someone_save_me said:
TL;DR
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Same.
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ShiningsTar542 said:
TL;DR



Here is a section for such a thing, Von the way.
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 TL;DR Here is a section for such a thing, Von the way.
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yeah, but nobody reads articals.
narlyvamp1234 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Nobody?..... Ohkay! >_>
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^ Agreed.
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2dolphn97 said:
I suggest that Du take this to the Schreiben club. But it rushes and doesn't have very good description. What could be like 5 pgs long Du smushed into a few paragraphs. Schreiben shouldn't be rushed
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Trainofdoom said:
Did NOT feel like Lesen all of that.
TL;DR
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Same! xD
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LeatherRain said:
TL;DR
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Wat does that mean?!?
2dolphn97 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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To long;Didn't read
tassia posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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K
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Alaa1999 said:
O_O so sad , y did u let him just die , u should've let them know each other better then u can let him die O_O and the story is short, but it's not bad i kinda liked it :)
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i am going to write the whole thing, i just wanted to know if anyone liked it.
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adultswimperson said:
I'm not Lesen all that.
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Skater_Girl_1 said:
ok i read it all and omg that is a sad story!!
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springely said:
0/10

Nice spam attempt.
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rorovipz said:
too long
but a very nice story
it so sad that he died
i even started to cry Von myself
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 too long but a very nice story it so sad that he died i even started to cry Von myself
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i am writting Mehr of it, maybe Du could read it.
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sure
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Mr-Pleasant said:
please,make Fragen Mehr shorts ok?
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neofly said:
at first cheezey then u cut him off of ur storie fast so idk were it would go after. but yeah pretty good im sorry for daneil that was really sad. But i would read it
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MarMar_XigLux said:
Well...Your Schreiben style is too simple. I'm not trying to offend oder anything, I'm just pointing it out...

...Not that my Schreiben is better. >:I
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JohnnieCade said:
Why did Du have to make him die? Why did Du have to make me cry? Man, that was depressing! But it was still good. Du just need to be more... descriptive with it, so it'll be longer.

And for the people who kept putting "Tl;DR", why even answer?
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