Good oder bad???

I'm Schreiben a story... it's about a twenty Jahr old girl with a 5 Jahr old daughter. She starts out living in Italy, where she moved for a modeling job. She goes on a datum with her best friend, Justin, and finds herself in love. The father of her child comes and says he's going to fight for custody of the 5 Jahr old. Minor details happen in between, and Justin goes off for two weeks to Beijing and comes back with another girl. Heartbroken, she moves back to Miami with her parents who are like uber-rich. After coming back from enrolling her daughter in school, she finds that Justin is waiting for her in her room, and has come all the way from Italy to get her back. Not only does she forgive him, but she accepts his marriage proposal. Then the father of her daughter comes back, tries to kidnap her, the comes back a Monat oder so later, to apologize, and ends up sleeping with her again.
There's tons of Mehr details that come after, but does this sound good??