What do Du think?

Honestly, I Liebe it! I'm a sucker for poems that rhyme. It's like a song without a beat,but amazing nonetheless,

nice =)

Eh lol

I Liebe it. Do nothing snow days are the best!

Eh, it sucks. :P

It's great. :D
I wish I had that kind of skill.

I'll be honest..

I don't like it much. It seems very.. immature?

I don't know how to describe it.

Maybe not rhyme as much.

i'll be honest...
it sucks, it's horrible, and it's a piece of shit
no offense. Du told me to be honest

I like it, I Liebe Schreiben poems, especially when they rhyme. ^^

But, now it's time for constructive criticism:

"Snow on the ground.
There's no school today.
So instead of learning
I'm going to waste the Tag away."
-Consider finding a way to drop "day" from the last line. It sounds too repetitive.

"I'll start of with breakfast."
-should be "I'll start off with breakfast."

"But evrything's a bore."
-should be "But everything's a bore."

But it was quite good, I did like it. =)
I think part of the reason I liked it is because I can relate to it, lol!
Gosh, I feel like I'm reviewing fanfiction. x)