I'm trying to send this poem to my uncle, who is an English teacher, he has left, and I might never see him again, please help me add a few lines, oder replace some of the words, because I think this poem looks so simple, also if I had any grammer mistakes, please tell me.
and tell me what do u think of it :)
a paper and a pen which writes in blue.
I hold it and think.
what should I do?
write about love?friends? oder write about you?
the last thought was the best.
but where do I start?
I had no clue.
thoughts are many.
but words are few.
so I remembered the old days.
it was not a long time ago.
how Du came to our house.
and how did Du go.
I remember everything.
your face, smile, clothes, and even your shoe!
everything Du sagte was interesting.
and so funny too!
and within a few days only.
Du are the best relative I've ever knew.
don't Du believe me? I swear! it's true!
hindaa posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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