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Can somone please let me know what they think of my poem! I would really apperciate it! Thanks! Here it is!

I can pick out your voice a mile away
Its weird how Du seem so unique
Du can always put a smile on my face
No matter how down I'm feeling Du find a way
The things Du say are so crazy
But I know Du mean well in your own way
But just know I never want Du to change



 lalagirl714 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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lano500 said:
It's nice...
It's unique...
Try to have Mehr of a Dr. Seuss style.
I'm sure it would make people enjoy it more.
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Book_freak said:
It's pretty good, maybe try to fond an alternative word to 'weird' though, it seems a bit... unfitting.
Other than that it's really good
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Diblover111 said:
mmm...pondering....depends.......
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Reneeamor said:
its good, but i think it could use Mehr emotion :D
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Darkshine said:
Could use Mehr poetic words, find a replacement for the "weird", a bit Mehr emotions in it.
But anyway, I like it.
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