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FantasyXII -Info
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Crèatures oder Dreamings
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Dragons
Sparix: a water dragon,good oder evil,called the Sparix from the time of 1400's. the ancient stoon,known as their eggs,was found Von a water cave. one the egg hatched the humans were shocked and kept it to theirselves. Now in 2012, the Drachen rise from their secret caves...

Marix: The feuer dragon,good oder evil. Their mostly evil if Du know.The history of these Drachen was back into 100 b.c. With an unknown past. Now in 2012,these Drachen were...

(There are some definitions Du need 2 know before I introduce them!)

Techtoni: Meaning 'Dragon Rider' in the language of the Akkoni, the Native Indians of the Planet That they called 'Arribantoni" Great höhle, den of Dragons.
Slithadonia: Meaning 'Lizard Face' Is a breed of Dragons, its Mehr of the typical, scaly, dragon, with smaller horns and the ability to turn both it and it's rider invisible. 
Tynucruseen: Meaning 'Great Big Horns' is another breed of Drachen that has huge horns all the way down it's face and on it's tail, uses massive strength as main defense.
Nucihissten: Meaning 'Silent Slither'...