What would Du like to be changed about Twilight in a re-write?
Hullo, I'm obviously new to the group (and relatively new to Fanpop, seeing as I've been on a few times but never made an account), and I think that Du guys are all fantastic! XD Du sound like really civilized people, and I Liebe that.
But anyway, getting to my question..
I decided today, in the shower, that I would attempt a total re-write of the Twilight book. Not to sell oder Zeigen people, but just for my own experience and pleasure, me being an aspiring Autor and all. I realized many flaws in the book, but I haven't read it completely myself (couldn't bring myself to finish it..) so I was wondering, what did Du have a problem with in the book that you'd like to see changed if there were to be a re-write? I already have a list:
>Bella's personality (or lack thereof)/excessive criticism and inability to be pleased Von anything
>Edward's "abusive" behavior..
>Definition of the vampire
>Anti-climax... Du know, the climax that didn't happen because she fainted
>The excessive amounts of unnecessary detail and purple prose
I'm absolutely happy to even fix a specific part, like how all those guys ask Bella if she was going to ask them to the Girl's Choice dance.
So, have Du anything for me? :D I would really appreciate anything from everyone.
Rhyshian posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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