schloss - To Live and Die in L.A. End Scene

I decided to make my first Fan fiction about schloss and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." schloss sagte looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" schloss stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." schloss whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." schloss sagte turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't Du sleep with...