i need help Schreiben my Manga

i have everything set up really...its just the minor details,like names and stuff.i would like to get your opinion for stuff:
main character: Aki...(last name?)
sub character:Anise...(last name?)
sub character who is their doctor:Sensei...(but what is his real name?)
sub character:Sho...(last name?)
and then we have the story. the story is kinda like bleach(i realized it after i watched it) but thats ok because lots of anime/mangas are like that. there is a hidden community(i need the name of the town too)where only the people who were born there can get in,or if someone who was born there brings Du there.(i need the name of the fighters who live there.or should i just name them fighters?:/ ) its a whole civilization where most people are regular civilians.then Du have the "government" (need a name for that too) where there is the king,7 leaders who judge. and lots of lower people in the "government" who do the lower work.(like soldiers oder errand men.)
now lets get to the fightrs. each one is granted a power.how they get the power is through a,what regular people,call,"fairies"(need a name for them too)each fairy grants the strong a power. the unstrong will Mitmachen the mass army that fight the neiboring "civilizations"(these civilizations are huge btw and there are 7 of them.each on the major contanants like africa,america,europe,etc.)anyways the "fairies" also give the own his choice of either a halskette oder a bracelett.each "fighter" needs the neclace oder bracelett to Zeigen he is a fighter and get in to the government offices oder "monster"(need a name for that too) areas. the monsters(like bleach) are from dead souls.after a person dies he becomes a soul and that soul evolves the longer it stays in the human world.at first they are really cute,small,fluffy blue creature that is harmless.but then it evolves into a bigger Mehr dangerous creature.as they evolve they get Mehr dangerous because they learn how to protect themselves from fighters and other souls.thats we
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no! it cut me off! :O
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the rest of it was "thats where the fighters come in.they fight the souls big oder small and send them to"heaven"(needs name too-_-) Du get all that?"
RobinFan360 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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btw Anise and Sho are bro and sis
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madening_mahem said:
I wanna help...but, there's so much! it's really hard to read it all with out losing your place, AND I'm not really good with bleach.

And the names and stuff, I'm not good with only choosing last names....sorry.

(I also create manga, but, it never gets to the book portion of it, it tends to be just characters and their profiles, and a prologue and story is made but never gets down on paper....probably because I don't know how to put it into words. So I need just as much help as you.)
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 I wanna help...but, there's so much! it's really hard to read it all with out losing your place, AND I'm not really good with bleach. And the names and stuff, I'm not good with only choosing last names....sorry. (I also create manga, but, it never gets to the book portion of it, it tends to be just characters and their profiles, and a prologue and story is made but never gets down on paper....probably because I don't know how to put it into words. So I need just as much help as you.)
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