Alpha und Omega Article: Runt's secret chapter 5:my arm

posted by Rockowolf123

Runt slowly got his sences back he did not know were he was
he smelled blood,drugs,and sick people
he found that he was in the hospial
the pack had advanced alot in technology
runt couldent feel his arm
your ok" stinky exclamed
what happend"runt asked
Du um Du Lost your arm" stinky studderd
what"runt sagte looking at his arm
he saw a steel arm were his used to be
there is some one who wants to see you"stinky said
it was tasha runts girlfreind
Runt your ok" Tasha said
yeah if ok is a missing fucking arm" runt sagte getting up
um Tasha i wanna know if um" runt Lost is words
what is it" tasha sagte in her french accent (she was french not like marcel i meen real french)
will Du um marrie me"runt sagte the thing he wanted to say sence he met tasha 4 years Vor
yes i have been waiting for Du to say that" tasha said

the end for now
its really short but it is important

mmmzone Please forgive me if I come off as rude, for that is not my intent. I have to say that you seriously need to work on your writing skills. The way you put these sentences together makes me think you just typed this up in less than five minutes or you are early in elementary school. I can barely understand what you are saying and therefore I have no idea what this story was about. When it comes to writing you have to sit down and re-read your work every time and make sure there are no spelling and grammatical errors so its easy for your readers to understand. Again, not trying to be rude, but I'm surprised nobody has said anything. Keep working at it though, you'll get there.

AlphaClub Nice dude. Is this the one you wanted me to look at?

What's your take, episode 2/TWIST OF HATE, GARTH

posted by Canada24

"Kill the Flaws!" - Garth

Okay..

As I remember there's one for Kate, Lilly and Humphrey as well.

But I don't know if these stories are still able to be found.
Keep in mind. I read these a long time ago.
Way before being a Brony, and discovering Fanpop shortly after (though the reasons for each, are not at all connected).

I would be willing to review the messed up one that was for Humphrey.
He loses his sight, and than his SANITY.
As he kills Winston, and then, fully snaps.

But if I were to disguess a story about Humphrey snapping.
I would do that delated one, I think was called "cold wind blows"
it ties with ROCKET TO INSANITY,...

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posted by Kitsune32

Ok Du guys. Here's the Sekunde for today. Stand Von Me was originally performed Von Ben E. King and was written Von Ben E. King, Jerry Leiber and Mike Stoller.

Runt's POV

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posted by Kitsune32

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Runt's POV

My parents and I were a far distance from the cave so my sister and brother wouldn't hear us and so they could still see the den. Once we got far enough, the three of us stopped walking and sat down. "Okay Runt now I think it's best that we talk about your feelings for Magril," my mom said. I nodded. "Ok, well when did this feeling start exactly?" She asked. "Well the Tag before...

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posted by Kitsune32

Sorry for the wait. I'm juggling another story. Here's Chapter 5.

No One's POV

Humphrey was the first in the höhle, den to wake up. As he got up slowly to prevent his family from being woken up, he noticed his youngest pup Runt was missing. He automatically assumed Runt went to get a drink of water Von the stream. So Humphrey decided to head to the stream as well. When he got there he didn't see a trace of Runt anywhere. At this point Humphrey was getting worried. His son was already pup-napped (sorry for the lame pun) once. He kept his cool to prevent himself from jumping to any conclusion. Humphrey...